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Published: 2013-12-30 17:34:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 16150; Favourites: 344; Downloads: 0
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A short animation I did in 2 days. I love this scene of The Little Mermaid. I tried not watch the film version... so the result is not too much professional as the film (of course I'm just an amateur xD) Hope you like it and leave a comment
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mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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Yes, but I remade it--->Β mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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Cool I hope you do more.
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New version
mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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amazing.... dont speak such nonsense. i love it
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Here's my new version... I think is better ^^
mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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Remake of this animation
mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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i really like it! pluse the face that you can see the colors, in the movies it was almost non-existent
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Hehe thanks for your commentΒ Β But look at my remake of this animation. Looks much better than this... thing xDΒ
mrrablo.deviantart.com/art/Surβ¦
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AGREED!!! this is fantastic!!!
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This looks wonderful! Very smooth animation
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You're welcome!
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I was going to leave a critique, but I figured I should ask first. Do you want a critique on this?
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Sure, but remember I have no idea of animation xDΒ
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Well, we'll see if this helps at all.
Overall it looks pretty darn good. I especially like the color scheme you used, especially for her skin, and the jeweling fits very well.
However, these are some things that stick out to me.
Your lines boils at her sternum and the overall form changes because of it. Your volume changes in the torso during the settle; her chest seems to thin out toward the last few frames. Keep an eye on the negative space between the back-side arm and the back of the torso. Your near-side arm is also changing shapes, up through the shoulder. Frame 14 of the gif seems to have a much longer line defining her shoulder than any of the surrounding frames. The bra strap is also sliding along her torso from frame 6 through the end. One last thing that confuses me is her head position during the surface break up until it's exposed from behind her hair. I may just be having trouble with the fact that it's obscured, but I feel the mass in a different place than where you've drawn it. (I haven't seen your planning, so take it with a grain of salt)
You're headed in a great direction; it just needs a little more refinement and a little more time. Keep going!
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You're totally right and I thank you for tell me those points. IΒ΄ll try to improve on animation
Thanks again
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It looks pretty good!!! Tell me about the textures here. Also, what program did you use for cleanup
?
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All was done on Photoshop Cs6
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This is beautiful, I really wish I could do traditional animation
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Sure you can 
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love it, it needs more follow through and a bit of overlapping action. also the water moves a bit fast for her motion or she moves a bit slow. I think you're on the right track keep going!
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Thanks for your comment and you're totally right
One day I'll repair those mistakes.
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na dont repair if you're done you're done. Use what you learn on the next one and good luck!Β
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Really excellent follow-through animation on the hair! My only suggestion would be to slow it down just a tad, it looks a little fast. But your animation is absolutely stunning, you should be very proud!
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You're completely right. I think I should fix it... well, now I'm making another animation so... one day I'll fix it xD
Thanks for your nice comment
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You mean you don't like it? Cause I'm just an amateur...Β Β ^^'
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No, I think it looks great. After looking at your gallery, I think this is your best work to date. I hope to see more animations from you in the future.
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Oh, then thanks
Well, this was my third colored animation. I try to do my best although I don't have any idea of what I'm making xD
Actually I'm making another animation much much better than this...
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I like this very much! Feels anime and disney at the same time.
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Thanks
Really? I didn't noticed, but watching it I guess you're right.
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Wow, this looks fantastic, really professional! This looks great!Β
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Thanks for your comment
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looks amazing!!! might i ask what program this was done in? it looks so professional
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I'm glad you like it
I use Photoshop Cs6 ^^
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