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#poem #redemption
Published: 2014-09-01 09:03:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2969; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Redemption is a self important bitchI hate him with a passion
His eyes gaze at the crowd with indifference
They all grovel at his feet,
Each with soiled slates they thrust at him
Over and over
He judges them by appearance
And brushes his hands over few stone slabs
The masters of which remove their bonds
And cast him a smile
He doesn't even glance back at them.
I'm tired of waiting through this hell
For someone I've come to hate
To deem me worthy of his time
I throw the slate at the back of his infuriating head
And kick off my shackles
I don't care if he wants to get his hands dirty
With my regrets anymore
Redemption can go fuck himself
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Comments: 7
Thank you but you know what Ive learned? Even if I am a better writer than you (which I don't think I am) the only way you can't get better is to stop comparing your work to that of others. I have this friend who's a better writer than I am, she's a WAAAAAY better artist and she's TOTALLY a better painter since I can't paint to save my life. I used to compare myself to her a lot but Ive let that go. Her stuff is hers and it isn't a reflection on mine. All it is is practice. Practice doesn't make perfect but it makes improvement. And I adore your work.
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Hmm.. you know, you're right
I think I've been learning to accept practicing and making flaws that help you learn.
Also, I've recently gotten an awesome creative wiring teacher at school who has been very helpful in teaching me what to learn
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thats great! Creative writing classes are awesome!
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