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MuseofMemory — Death By Love
Published: 2008-02-03 05:40:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Your love almost killed meAnd you didn’t care
I really needed you
You were never there
You could have helped
If you wanted to
But you turned your back
Only cared about you
We could have moved on
If you would have been smart
But now I’ve died
Of a broken heart
Now you can sing
My funeral song
Think of the things
You did wrong
You should be thrilled
You got what you wanted
But don’t celebrate too soon
Instead, prepare to be haunted
You’ll never be happy
If I have my way
I won’t rest in peace
Til it’s your turn to decay
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Comments: 8
Short, and to the point. Whoever you lost, it sounds painful.
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Oh I love this too!! really good revenge My only thing is this one's a little cliche'd at points but other wise one of the nicer poems
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depicts the emotion but lets face it here youre either faced with this passing thought or youre not truly letting that raw hatred flow
if you were going for a nonchalant "youll get yours . . dont you worry" attitude . . . then thats what i got from this
if you were going for a true release of unbridled emotion . . . dont hold back next time
i liked the poem i just wasnt sure what aim you had with the attitude
please respond with which it was
-G
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It was a mix of both. Sort of cold hatred.
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I especially like the 4th verse of this, it makes me think it could go be the refrain of some amazingly cool rock song. Plus it is full of solid emotion. Beautiful
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I love the words. Have you considwered putting this into lyrics? I believe that that'd give it a nice effect.
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Kinda like me and my ex. He just dumped me yesterday, and I'm really upset. He didn't even do it himself, he had somebody else do it for him. Retard
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