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After having to deal with setting up how Master Fiendish began to succeed in his plots with Wyrm Lung and Vindicta Witchcraft, I finally get to properly introduce the Siblings of the Yin Yang. I have also edited a bit on the cosmic hierarchy in my older journal on Satan, the Deities between Hyperversal to Universal, and I added one-dimensional beings as well. As for Messor here, I wanted to show a blade like look to the front of her face, though I'll need to figure out how to shade her. And I drew this by hand, since the battery in my mac pencil is no longer rechargeable at the moment.
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Story
The throne room Master Fiendish entered into was ludicrously enormous! So big that Fiendish's old headquarters, the abandoned bank, could fit comfortably with extra room to spare. And swarming within, were thousands of aggressive Fairy Godmother soldiers defending the three perpetrators. Strangely however, there were no other soldiers, no knights in armor, no archers, there weren't even any royal guard dogs. Immediately the fantastical army aim their Valentine Rose shaped magic wands and open fire at Master Fiendish, shooting a mighty powerful and presumably lethal magic spell of glittering hearts of all shapes, sizes and colors of pink, purple and red!
Fiendish stands his ground, taking off his hat and letting his arms out wide open, as if anticipating the blast! All casts were a direct hit while through the portal, Vindicta tightens her grip on the wagon, dreading for the worst while the Fairy Godmother army jump to conclusions and start a victory dance. Yet as the heart sprinkled dust settles, it is revealed that absolutely none of them caused even a few loose strings to stick out from the cotton and linen of Fiendish's green caped tuxedo, causing the army to halt their victory dance and quiver in terror.
Fiendish gives off the death stare at these frightened fluttering fools while brushing off the heart shaped glitter from his mustache and beard. He then suddenly whips out from his cloak a pair of M1921s, which he swings over his head and rattles out brass and copper galore, like a drunk chimpanzee (deliberately)! He was confident when putting a hand to his ear and hearing a few dozen splats from the struck assailants crash-land onto the marble floor, their torn out moth wings floating around like feathers. The rest of the fairy godmother soldiers flock out the window, squealing all the way like hunted game in retreat. It's a good thing there were no practical warriors in the room because despite his weapons being leagues ahead of his enemies', Fiendish would have been going on a suicide mission. Placing his hat back on, Fiendish starts his negotiation with Matrina.
Master Fiendish; "I introduce myself to you as Master Fiendish, monarch of the natural resources!"
The enemy royal trio do not answer. Even more, they don't even bother to look up at Fiendish. The mastermind begins to loose a bit of patience.
Master Fiendish; "What had just occurred was the short lived struggle between the irrational and the rational! On one side the feelings of passion being misused as magic ammunition for a temper tantrum, against a pair of practical loaded firearms on the other side! And my side came out on top, because Romance is nothing more than someone's desire for someone else due the their allure, as well as an addiction I am trying to get rid of!"
His three enemies still fail to look up at Fiendish. Huddled together and shivering, it appeared as if the three were too frightened to even listen. Further loosing patience, the mastermind shifts the portal he came through to reveal the bombs that Vindicta and Wyrm have loaded on their wagon.
Master Fiendish; "These, on the other hand, are actual super weapons of mass destruction, capable of leveling entire kingdoms to ashes and leaving the survivors near it poisoned by its radiation! And if only I asked your daughter earlier on what's been going on, Matrina, I could have stopped this emotionally delusional stupidity much earlier, yet these nuclear warheads are not specifically meant for you! I know that there is a string-puller who's manipulating you against your will to ruin your daughter's life, and I believe that this tyrant is an old enemy of mine that needs to be dealt with!"
Fiendish raises up his Jade Emerald Cane as Wyrm and Vindicta ready the wagon of warheads.
Master Fiendish; "Now I ask you, who is the string-puller so that your daughter will have her revenge on the real jackass behind her suffering!?"
Yet when the three targets finally look up at Fiendish, to his shock, they have actually been greiving over the horrifically mangled up remains of what appears to be King Cepit Oblivio. The looks on their faces make them appear as if they were zombies feeding upon a disemboweled carcass. Not to mention, they were sobbing with tears staining their royal makeup dripping from the Edvard Munch's Scream faces and mixing with the blood of Matrina's deceased husband.
Matrina Beatitudine; "We already know what romance is supposed to be. And we thank you so much for giving my daughter everything we were forced to refrain from. If it wasn't for that damn oppressor, I could have been her true parent!"
Vastata Oblivio; "I could have been her true sibling!"
Superbus Inprobus; "I could have been her true spouse!"
Vindicta started to cry upon hearing the sad truth of these unfortunate, suffering souls, and began to regret her hatred towards them.
Master Fiendish; "Then who the Hell is the string-puller!?"
Yet before any of them could answer, a mysterious force grips their throats and the three are suspended in midair. Next, they start to literally be ripped apart as they scream in agonizing pain. It was as if every cell in their bodies were being torn asunder, until there was hardly much left than a gelatinous whirlwind of blood. Fiendish, Wyrm and Vindicta were speechless upon witnessing this horror, for what was most unnaturally disturbing of all, was that the victims were still alive and fully conscious as they scream out for mercy, despite it being physically impossible for them to do so!
(The mass of hovering meat); "PLEASE! LORD MESSOR! END OUR SUFFERING!"
Suddenly, a black shadowy being rips through the fabrics of the universe, fazing out of existence everything in its path until through the ceiling, it lands right on top of the suffering individuals, erasing them in the blink of an eye!
The sudden arrival causes Master Fiendish to flinch back, dropping his cane as deeper cracks form on the carved gems as it hits the floor! Wyrm and Vindicta also back away in shock as the being reveals it's profile. It was female, she stood as tall as Wyrm Lung at 9 feet, with a thin profile with the body and limbs of some sort of armored humanoid Pepsis grossa with curved blades on the hands and feet, and when she raised her head, it had a familiar shape. The top of her head was long and blade like with a sharp tip at the top, her nose was thrice as long as Fiendish's, which curled downwards over the sharp chin which is curled upwards. The face was a grim and disturbing sight, her furious marked eyes were an intricate overlapping of white irises and black pupils that made her look like she snatching souls just by looking around, her ears looked more like carving knives and her mouth had no lips, only a row of sharp predatory teeth. And what she had to say was this;
"I am the manifested physical avatar of Messor, the Destroyer Deity of the Yin! I have heard the cries of those who long to end their suffering, and I have answered their prayers for a merciful oblivion! And now to end your obsolete exsistence, MASTER FIENDISH!!!"
Fiendish begins to feel goosebumps as he backs away in fear.
Master Fiendish; "I thought you were the one pulling the strings on everyone here!"
Messor; "I cut the decaying strings that pull the suffering, wether by my own will upon worlds or from being summoned by the prayers of individuals as well as those around them, and your strings have been rotting for quite some time!"
Fiendish looked at the invisible barrier of destruction around Messor. Everything in a 9 foot radius from her phases out of existence, as she walks on the thin void where once lay the marble floor and throne rug. In his intuition, the mastermind realized that if everything that comes near Messor vanishes, then so would even his most lethal arsenal. Fiendish snatches his cane and makes a mad dash for the portal, throwing out a gesture to Wyrm and Vindicta to cancel dropping the bombs. Yet as he does so, Messor suddenly teleports right in front of Fiendish, blocking his only chance of escape! Messor then advances towards Fiendish at an even faster pace, raising her arm and preparing to exterminate her target. Even worse, due to the cracks on Fiendish's Jade Emerald Cane, not only is the portal that was conjured up from it slowly fading away, Fiendish's jade trinkets no longer enable him the capabilities to safely get away!
Master Fiendish; "VINDICTA, WYRM LUNG, DO SOMETHING!!!"
As the mastermind turns tail and flees screaming like a goat, Messor rushes straight for him and is just about to use her bladed hand like an executioner's sword, until suddenly!-
Vindicta Witchcraft; "KEEP YOUR BLADES OFF OF FIENDISH!"
Despite also having the same intuition as Fiendish in terms of Messor's power, Vindicta takes action and casts her own powers of destruction in the form of magic spells through the closing portal, hitting Messor's barrier from behind her back! As Messor turns around to try and understand the meaning of such a futile retaliation, Wyrm Lung swoops across the portal just as it fades out and breaths his dragon fire around the Destroyer Deity, as if trying to block her vision! Wyrm then snatches Fiendish by his shoulders like a bird of prey, minus the violent crushing grip, and hauls him onto his back! The two soar across the throne room, giving Messor a wide birth as Wyrm surrounds her with even more fire breath, before crashing out the window and swooping across the fields!
Master Fiendish; "Thanks for the rescue!"
Wyrm Lung; "No problem, I just had to return the favor to you for saving me from a runtish Chosen One!"
Her confusion by the distraction of fire quickly being replaced by fury upon finding out that her prime target had escaped, Messor expands her destructive barrier, phasing out of existence Matrina's entire castle!
Messor; "You're delaying your inevitable fate, Fiendish!"
Messor then channels her barrier of destruction forwards like a ray and narrows it towards Fiendish as he rides on Wyrm's back. Wyrm spots the attack and dodges just in time in an aerial maneuver as the negative ray wipes clean entire forests, rivers, mountains, the sky and even the fabrics of space above into nothing!
Wyrm Lung; "You never told Vindicta and I about this Destroyer freak!"
Master Fiendish; "I thought you already knew of her and dare not speak of her name!"
Wyrm Lung; "Huh, interesting point."
Across the planes Wyrm soars as fast as he could with Messor right behind them until finally, they have reached their kingdom as Vindicta waits at the front gates with Wyrm Lung's entire army behind her! Wyrm lands right past the gates just in time, drops Fiendish and readies his forces, including his special divisions hiding in the forests near the kingdom walls with all their weapons aimed at the target, as Messor halts her advances!
Wyrm Lung; "We have you surrounded and we will defend to the bitter end, no matter how powerful you are! So tell us, why are you after Master Fiendish!?"
Messor; "Why?..."
Messor walks up to Wyrm Lung, yet lowers her barrier to just the surface of her body so she can talk down at Wyrm.
Messor; "You could not comprehend the difficulty I had in order to pass the legal requirements from the Twin Angel and Demon Possessors of Power, Sentience and Prescience, and each of their subordinate Twin Channelers of Power, Prescience and Sentience as well as the the Maintainers of Order and Chaos, Reality and Fantasy, Space and Time, Matter and Energy, Life and Death, Logic and Emotion so I am allowed permission to descend upon this mortal plane of existence as this avatar, just to delete that obsolete disposable vermin who had used up his entire existence for nothing more than failed melodramatic villainous acts!"
Wyrm paused and hesitated on what to say as he had never heard of such a variety of Cosmic Deities in his entire life. Messor uses her power to freeze the entire army through space and time, levitates Wyrm Lung off the ground to toss him out of her way. Again the Destroyer prepares to exterminate Master Fiendish as yet again he prepares to flee, until Vindicta Witchcraft abruptly rushes between Messor and her victim!
Vindicta Witchcraft; "Fiendish has done so much more for us than that! He saved Wyrm and I from a lifetime of suffering, he helped raise this entire kingdom from its foundations, and he taught me the real meaning of what it's like to love and be loved! You have to get through me if you dare attempt to kill the man who's like the brother I never had!"
Messor takes a while to understand everything Vindicta had said by taking a look at the entire kingdom she stands before, and then turns to Fiendish.
Messor; "It'll all be for nothing, I sense that my brother feels he has made a mistake with you, because of what you have done to help the two you care about the most."
Master Fiendish; "You mean my creator? What does he have to do with Wyrm and Vindicta?"
Messor; "He is their creator as well, and he is also their string-puller!"
Next Chapter...
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Comments: 6
AudeS [2017-08-22 12:56:02 +0000 UTC]
It is this chapter, where you start to see the bigger picture more clearly, and the one thing you thought was the case, that Messor was the villain of the story and Provisor the good guy helping Fiendish, it all was an illusion of our own perception. Messor is basically just doing her job, and is quite reasonable if she does not have someone on her list, but Provisor, hoh boy, he played everyone like pawns in this sick game of his, to a point that the people that made Vindicta's life so horrible wish to be free of their guilt and pain by the hand of destruction incarnate. It was quite heartwarming for them to admit their sins towards Vindicta in the end, allowing ammends to be made perhaps.
What I also find nice is how Vindicta and Wyrm stood up for Fiendish, though naturally Vindicta probably had more success by making Messor look around the proof that Fiendish is now no longer obsolete. Of course, then she drops the bomb and reveals that the creator is pretty much the true bad guy here. It is a good twist in the story, as naturally it comes unexpected, but at a point of the story where it is certainly powerful without really breaking any build up, as Messor and Provisor have only been briefly shown and their motivations could only be assumed. Hence you perfectly played with expectations and made me quite positively surprised.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to AudeS [2017-08-23 16:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I could not have summed up this chapter better myself, since I just didn't think that having Messor as the main villain was compelling enough and there are lots of creators depicted as the benevolent. I didn't want the three to come off as completely blood hungry and at least show that what they once thought was the source of the hardship in truth never wanted anything to do with it.
Since Fiendish saved Wyrm and Vindicta's lives, they needed to return the favor, and Fiendish's quote, "VINDICTA, WYRM LUNG, DO SOMETHING!" was taken straight out of Dick Dastardly calling out his incompetent Muttley as a nice little tribute. Even though Messor is just doing what fills her purpose, she is still cold-heated and brutally honest about the real threat that the primary three are about to face. I'm glad I started expanding a bit more on the Siblings of the Yin Yang, since in my first chapter I was still trying to figure out their character. And thank you, I'm glad I was able to pull off a good twist to the story.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to SwordSparks [2017-08-19 21:05:52 +0000 UTC]
Yes, Vindicta had to stand up for Fiendish in return.
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ChoonLasty-Ghost [2017-08-19 12:47:41 +0000 UTC]
While I didn't get to read the rest of the story, this chapter was putting stuff really concerning (I mean, intense). Can't say much that, is well written, and I also liked the illustration of the Yang.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to ChoonLasty-Ghost [2017-08-19 17:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to take your time, and there's no need to comment on all chapters. Yes, chapters 5 and 6 reveal the true antagonists Fiendish and his friends are up against. I'm glad you enjoy the story so far as well as the designs of these two.
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