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MWBlueWolfIt Bit Me
Published: 2012-12-18 00:54:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 7189; Favourites: 124; Downloads: 117
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Description "And tomorrow we'll install the kitchen cabinets along this wall here," the man gestured into the adjacent room.

My mother nodded in agreement as the construction contractor spoke. All the while, I sat slouched in boredom against the unpainted drywall of my newly-constructed home, my eyes wandering around the unborn living room as I searched for something, anything, to pique my interest. I desperately prayed for any form of entertainment or distraction, but the room loomed in desolate quietness. The scruffy man with my mother turned and stretched his hand out towards the wall directly across from me, redressing the cryptically dull conversation into that of the addition of a new fireplace. I gave another sigh of boredom and rested my small chin on top of my crossed arms. But just then, salvation presented itself to me in the form of a slight glinting atop the nearby counter dividing the two rooms.

I returned my gaze to my mother, who still stood with her back to me, nodding on occasion. So as not to draw attention to myself, I silently got to my feet and stepped to the source of the shimmer. I had to stand on the tips of my toes to reach it, but after much perseverance and stretching, I finally felt the frosted touch of metal against my tiny fingertips. It was my mother's car key—a jagged silver sliver tipped with an ebony rubber grip. For the next few minutes, my mother and the contractor continued their conversation as I fascinated myself with the alien object, playing with it between my hands.

As any child would, I soon grew bored with the things, shiny though they were, and carelessly shoved them into my pocket, listening to the faint jingle they made. After checking to ensure my mother's attention was still elsewhere, I turned and ran down the entrance hall as noiselessly as possible, searching for a new source of amusement; namely, exploration.

I soon found that the house was astonishingly dull, deserted and dreary with its absence of furniture. I wandered around the house aimlessly until my imagination eventually kicked in.

The imagination of a child is a curious and powerful thing, so much so that it must be extinguished before one reaches adulthood. Within each room, I became lost in a new corner of my own mind. I was an explorer in the foyer, which had distorted into a magnificent jungle; I was a cowboy in the desert of the dining room; I was an astronaut amongst the craters of the study; and lastly, I was a racecar driver in the cramped laundry room at the rear of the house. The race was about to begin.

I sat on the bitter linoleum, clutching an invisible steering wheel firmly in my fists. I could hear the jubilant cheers of the crowd, feel the faint hum of the seat beneath me, and see the referee as he raised a microphone to his face.

"Racers—START YOUR ENGINES!"

I retrieved my mother's keys from the depths of my pocket, bringing the thin metal strip closer and closer to the hungry, vivid scarlet slot. As soon as the metal tip met the gaping trench, it was swallowed whole.

The mirage surrounding me shattered to pieces, replaced with a sharp sensation I had never felt before. My nerves cried out in pain, and my hand trembled violently, all before my brain could comprehend what was happening.

To a child, electricity is an enigma—an invisible force with no physical presence and magic-like properties. A child cannot comprehend the sheer lethality of 250 volts of pure, unrestrained energy. I sat there for what felt like ages, my body vibrating, twitching and convulsing frantically. All the while, my fingers remained glued to the key. Try as I might to pry them open, it was useless. My hands had gone completely numb, incapable of responding to wave after wave of distress messages flowing from my brain. My head was splitting, my brain screaming relentlessly in response to every nerve's plea. Let go; relax your hand; release your grip; do it! And then, a message I had never heard before—one so primal, it rose above all the others and shouted from the farthest reaches of my mind.

You're going to die.

My stomach churned over, and I could feel the stir of nausea rise to my throat. Tears streamed forth from my eyes. Suddenly, as if of its own free will, my hand lurched from the key's hilt, leaving behind a painful, screeching trail before collapsing to the floor in exhaustion.

I clasped the lifeless hand in the fingers of its brother and sat there, my face a snow white with eyes wide and watering. The key remained clasped in the jaws of the power outlet, trembling and jittering in terror as it was eaten alive, wedged in the beast's left tooth. As soon as my legs would allow, I leapt to my feet and fled the room crying.

Retracing my path, I sprinted to the room where my mother and the contractor still stood. A wave of ecstatic relief washed over me, and I finally felt safe once more. My mother turned when she heard me approaching, and gave a start of surprise when I clung to her leg, burying my face against her thigh. As I whimpered into the cloth of her pants, she looked down at me with a look of concern and confusion, exchanging glances with the equally perplexed man at her side. When my voice finally returned to me, I tipped my head back, stared up at her with eyes still watering, and explained all that had happened to the best of my ability:

"Mommy, it bit me!"
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Comments: 74

DrIgnacious In reply to ??? [2013-02-13 09:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is amazing. And it actually happened?

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MWBlueWolf In reply to DrIgnacious [2013-02-21 00:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this was written to the best of my recollection. And thanks so much for the compliment!

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Strudel--Cutie4427 [2013-02-13 09:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Wait, you actually DID this? Oh wow, silly child. (Then again, I was a silly child myself so I can't really talk lol... I'm STILL a silly child lol)

What a clever piece, I was waiting to see what bit you and I didn't even see it coming until I realized where you put the key and by then I was too engrosed to care about the name of the story. Well done

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MWBlueWolf In reply to Strudel--Cutie4427 [2013-02-21 01:05:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you were so engrossed by my story; considering I aim to be an author. words like those are very reassuring!

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Strudel--Cutie4427 In reply to MWBlueWolf [2013-02-21 01:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Well you're deffinately on the right track!

(So am I)

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MWBlueWolf In reply to Strudel--Cutie4427 [2013-02-21 01:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Good luck to both of us on our future endeavors!

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Strudel--Cutie4427 In reply to MWBlueWolf [2013-02-21 04:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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Nemononiam In reply to ??? [2013-02-05 01:27:18 +0000 UTC]

OHMYGOSH congratulations on the well-deserved DLD!!!
I'm glad to see your genius was recognized!!

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MWBlueWolf In reply to Nemononiam [2013-02-05 01:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Imagine coming back to dA after a long while of inactivity to see this. I won't lie, it definitely brightened by day. Thanks for your continuous support. :3

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Nemononiam In reply to MWBlueWolf [2013-02-05 02:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Surely!

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pinballwitch In reply to ??? [2013-01-31 01:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on DLD Excellent job with descriptions

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MWBlueWolf In reply to pinballwitch [2013-02-05 01:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really appreciate the support. ^-^

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xlntwtch In reply to ??? [2013-01-30 06:50:45 +0000 UTC]

and congratulations on the DLD.
For some reason, I liked the sparse dialogue the most. It was exmeplary and I hope to see more by you.
Thank you.

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MWBlueWolf In reply to xlntwtch [2013-02-05 01:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the feedback and favorite.

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xlntwtch In reply to MWBlueWolf [2013-02-05 02:49:56 +0000 UTC]

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DailyLitDeviations In reply to ??? [2013-01-30 06:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.

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Nemononiam [2012-12-18 21:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! It's great to have you back by the way!

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MWBlueWolf In reply to Nemononiam [2012-12-18 23:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Hopefully, I'll stay back a bit longer this time...

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Mystic-Cheetah [2012-12-18 13:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! I like how creative this is and how it doesn't all really tie together until the very end.

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MWBlueWolf In reply to Mystic-Cheetah [2012-12-18 23:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback. It helps me write better in the future.

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chocoleesy [2012-12-18 01:54:34 +0000 UTC]

woah- is that all true?

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MWBlueWolf In reply to chocoleesy [2012-12-18 23:09:12 +0000 UTC]

More or less. When I say that, I mean yes, I did almost die when I was a kid, but a lot of the details are shaky. This is how I remember it, but being young, a lot of details have probably been warped or twisted. I do know that I stuck a key in a high-powered electrical socket. :I

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chocoleesy In reply to MWBlueWolf [2012-12-21 06:01:17 +0000 UTC]

oh wow must've hurt :/

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