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Storyfan134 [2020-12-08 05:26:36 +0000 UTC]
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Forcedlactationlover [2016-08-04 20:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Second comment for me: I've always preferred the slower, almost natural speeds, for one major reason; it allows time to develop characters. In my case, they're not usually happy with the expansion/growth, but they are willing to try to understand that it's happening, even when they don't know why.
I should note that this essay is well written, and well thought out.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to Forcedlactationlover [2016-08-04 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that is definitely an advantage, but I've seen great writers write short stories that do characters really, really well, despite the short length.
And thanks! Its a bit old, but I'm glad to see that its still helping others out.
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DevyFox111 [2016-03-29 07:21:23 +0000 UTC]
"Don't do it to impress the community, don't do it to show off to others, don't do it because you feel like you need to...DO IT FOR YOU."
Great, now when I finally get around to writing a BE story I'll be overstressing myself worrying if I'm doing it for the right reasons
Then again if I'm overstressing myself at all I probably shouldn't bother >.>
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to DevyFox111 [2016-03-29 07:40:28 +0000 UTC]
haha, trust me, its an internal battle for me when I write sometimes as well.
writing can be a naturally stressful thing, of course, but you should focus on making it fun for you while it write than worrying about it all the time. Its just how I see it anyways
And most of the times, stories can be worth the stress when all is said and done, so there's that too.
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DevyFox111 In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2016-03-29 17:07:28 +0000 UTC]
The thing is, I like to write not only because it's fun to express myself and get my fantasies out there, but I also know there's a small part of it that's just me trying to prove to myself and everyone around me that I can actually do it. I want to feel proud of myself and I want others to be proud of me. And believe me, I know that's not a good reason to do anything artistically. If you're not doing it from the heart, it's not going to be very good art. But I can't help myself. And even though it's just a small part of it, I overthink it to the point to where it becomes the forefront of my thoughts on the subject.
Anyways, I've been rambling on too much. I'll try to forget about all my anxieties and just write, because doing something is better than doing nothing.
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Forcedlactationlover In reply to DevyFox111 [2016-07-17 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm with DevyFox111 on this, but note that that is 'doing it for you'. However, I also fully agree with that very last phrase.
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FoeHammer15 [2015-09-10 03:01:26 +0000 UTC]
Just kinda curious does anybody have a link to the different stories? Such as the lucky series?
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to FoeHammer15 [2015-09-10 03:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, found the lucky series on the overflowing bra (overfglowingbra(dot)com). As for the other series that I mentioned, they can all be found on the author's pages, which are embedded in the journal.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to FoeHammer15 [2015-09-10 06:19:25 +0000 UTC]
No problem, enjoy that series! Its a good one!
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Jeufufns [2015-04-12 06:20:24 +0000 UTC]
I kinda like the seperation created here. Though instant growth works when happening in the morning/over night, it usually still gives my brain the impression of a bad story. Embarassed to say that Masked Man's drink and the next three stories I planned on writing feature the third type, though I'm actively looking into the second.
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BESarah [2015-01-23 17:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the help! I'll keep those tips in mind when I am editing my next story!
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to BESarah [2015-01-23 17:06:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Can't wait to see the next story.
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BrowsingChipmunk [2015-01-23 11:53:20 +0000 UTC]
These tips are very useful. Thanks for sharing this!
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to BrowsingChipmunk [2015-01-23 17:05:44 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Happy to help
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to Bantlebroth [2015-01-23 17:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Haha, that's fine! Again, these aren't the laws of expansion, just some ideas, that's all
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Rez14 [2015-01-22 19:40:19 +0000 UTC]
This is very helpful. Thanks for this. Now I know how to make my stories better.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to Rez14 [2015-01-22 19:42:55 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all! Glad I could help
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to chasbanner [2015-01-22 18:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Its no problem, I hope they can help
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No-Known-Name [2015-01-22 07:18:19 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I suppose most of my stuff falls under fast, the ten minute mark more or less. Though I do try to get into maybe too much detail on the growth at times... Though in any event, I so agree with your closing statement. I admit, I generally write most of my stuff with myself first and foremost in mind. If I do end up with an audience that likes it, that's just icing on the cake.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to No-Known-Name [2015-01-22 07:36:46 +0000 UTC]
Getting into descriptions is never a bad thing. Detail is very important in expansion stories. It'd be hollow without them, really.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to AlphaVragg735 [2015-01-21 23:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man How have ya been?
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AlphaVragg735 In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2015-01-21 23:19:59 +0000 UTC]
Doing well! Been busy
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to AlphaVragg735 [2015-01-21 23:20:28 +0000 UTC]
No kidding! Try to take it easy once in a while
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AlphaVragg735 In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2015-01-22 00:23:14 +0000 UTC]
Hehe been trying. I recently completed a 32 page 16,000 word story
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to AlphaVragg735 [2015-01-22 00:24:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Impressive sir. Keep it up!
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AlphaVragg735 In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2015-01-22 00:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You too man
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to Xiixu [2015-01-21 22:45:02 +0000 UTC]
No probs! Hope they can help
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TheGeckoKing [2015-01-21 22:21:32 +0000 UTC]
Some good useful tips. Have been trying to write a story, but progress is VERY slow. (Im lazy with that kind if thing) ill keep your tips in mind.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to TheGeckoKing [2015-01-21 22:26:05 +0000 UTC]
Haha, glad they could help! Best of luck with the writing.
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BioYuGi [2015-01-21 22:18:39 +0000 UTC]
Very nice descriptions. I usually like working somewhere between moderate or fast growth myself. I really like doing something that builds up to a crescendo, like it starts off with them growing a cup size every twenty minutes or so, but then the expansion kicks into overdrive and they start really plumping up fast.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to BioYuGi [2015-01-21 22:20:03 +0000 UTC]
That is an extremely fun one that I enjoy writing as well. Build up is key in a good suspenseful BE story, at least in my opinion anyways.
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BioYuGi In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2015-01-21 22:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh definitely. I don't really do much of the 'instant' expansion but it's definitely fun, more for roleplays I think where you can get a big reaction or something.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to BioYuGi [2015-01-21 22:25:40 +0000 UTC]
Instant expansion is very tricky, so I take the "short bursts" method whenever I do it. Otherwise I pretty much avoid it, unless its over night, which I used to disdain, but now I love, if it is used right and the character has the appropriate reactions.
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BioYuGi In reply to mysteryguy9215 [2015-01-21 22:27:35 +0000 UTC]
Overnight expansion is something interesting as well, I don't think I've really delved into that. I think for instant expansion, I'd still need it to take place over five or ten minutes for my own pacing sake. Heh, my early stories I feel like I would have been more comfortable doing something that quick, and now I consider a ten-page story 'short', when that was unheard of years ago. So an instant expansion for me would still be drawn-out and detailed, which is good I suppose.
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to BioYuGi [2015-01-21 22:52:08 +0000 UTC]
That is incredibly good. Description is key. I plan on making more tips down the road, and I'll delve into that subject. If you want a good overnight expansion, look no further than this story right here: (you probably have already read it but ah well) mysteryguy9215.deviantart.com/…
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HappyTriangle [2015-01-21 22:11:19 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I made a BE story here; happytriangle.deviantart.com/a…
You mind looking at it and telling me where I can improve?
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mysteryguy9215 In reply to HappyTriangle [2015-01-21 22:20:24 +0000 UTC]
Of course! I'll get to it when I get a few music projects done here in a bit
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