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Experimenting with coloring and style for future comics.HOW DO YOU COMIC.
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH...... Great work! Really great! All of your art work inspires me! Thank you!! Keep it up!!
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Ever tried making a graphic novel? I WANT TO SOOOO BAD!
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Geez, how DO you comic?? I need to buckle down. Love the fluid movements!!
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what I envy you the most is the feeling o movement that you put in your drawings... damn you uheuehuehueheuhe
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is this a comic because if it is where do I read it.
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will you make more of them? or a comic all together?
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YOU DO COMIC GOOD IS HOW *flail*
So is this page set in a dark area? I like that it's muted but retains a lot of color diversity. The dynamic panels are an awesome choice, too. The only thing is that one of the signs is missing from the pole in the first panel (she is fighting with a traffic sign here, isn't she!? Love it) so it took me a while to realize that was the sign in the last panel. Perhaps I'm slow, but at first I thought it was just weird extra-panel transition decoration and I was wondering why the upside-down exclamation point was there. Heh.
I think the monochrome silhouette works well, especially for the humorous aside, but also because it seems like a nice change for there not to be a huge overwhelming focus on the explosion. Complex panels could turn into a huge mess to read if done wrong, but you have a strong control of action lines so it flows really well and the action's easy to follow.
TL;DR I would be hella jazzed to read/buy a comic that looked like this.
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You seem to be able to comic. Very well.
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Hey bro I realize that this comment is like a month overdue, but I have a quick fix to break up the last two panels that I don't think anyone mentioned. All you gotta do to have the last panel read clearly is add a white border around it like you have with the others. When you have a color book, especially on pages with darker tones like this one, white borders read very clearly as panel breaks.
Umm I know you're not gonna revisit this thing, but I mentioned it cause I thought it'd be a helpful tip for future comic pages. uvu
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WHOOHOO, I was looking forward to seeing you post a comic page!!! 
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why do you taunt us?
i recommend reading scott mcclouds comic books on comics =]
they have good universal tips
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I don't know how to describe how I feel about your drawing without going into Capslock-mode and spamming you with fangirly glee. Meh, screw it:
FJAJOIFJEALKFJEAFJEKLAJFOPEAJFLEKJFKLDJALKFJAOPJFEWA EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Okay back on point, I love this! Their poses, the color scheme, THEIR POSES! This is amazing. The only critique I could possibly come up with have to do with the 4th to 5th panel. (I'm not sure how to describe what I'm talking about. So the next few things I say may sound like bullshit). I understand that she's flipping herself back on her feet once I read the last panel, but I don't know if that's made clear in the 4th one. Maybe a different pose, I guess, and/or a different angle, too. The change from side-view back to front might be what's confusing me. And her dialogue in the 5th panel could use a few exclamation points. I'd figure someone who's sent flying through the air would probably do some yelling, but then again it's Enna and she's probably had more then a few epic fights in her lifetime.
I feel like a dickbag for typing all that out, now. DX Either way this is gorgeous. I love it!
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MAKE THE COMIC! There aren't many works that look this pretty and awesome! Honestly, the dynamics ad color schemes of comics I've read are subpar compare to this.
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I'm not sure if you're looking for crits or not, and I couldn't really tell you how to fix anything, but as a reader, I can point out some things which made fallowing the page more difficult.
The first and fourth panels have characters bleeding into the background because of their closeness in tone/hue whatever. I had no idea what the girl was flying into in the lead panel at first. The character on the fourth panel 'pops' a little more than the first, but it still suffers from the same problem. Maybe incress the contrast of the colors a bit? Or use a uniform color for outlines? The other thing is the last panel overlapping the third makes it hard to fallow the action in that panel. I had to look at it a few times before I understood she was being knocked back(?) by an explosion. (Or rebuffed by the force of their blows?) Either way it was hard to fallow. Despite these minor things this looks like it will shape up to be a fairly awesome scene when it's finished. It's ridiculously well drawn and is just dynamic and awesome. Hope to see more soon.
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Ah, yes I know, I'm one of those art critiques who's own art skill doesn't lend itself to my authority on the matter. I hope you will take my words as constructive as you like. :3
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Maybe you can explore a longer page size? Instead of a 8.5x11 in paper, you can try a 9x6 in.
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The last panel is confusing. I didn't know who the person in the back was for a while, and only figured out because of the stop sign. The explosion is under-emphasized, and Enna's epic pose feels like its in the same panel as the "BOOM; Yeesh, prick".
Otherwise, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
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Love it! The way you're doing the color based light and multicolored outlines really shines here. Experiment successful, I'd say.
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Amazing paneling!
My one suggestion is to make the image a bit larger, actually. The page is so small. :c
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I WANT TO FOREVER READ THIS COMIC. WHAT MUST I DO TO ACQUIRE SAID AMAZING COMIC.
i adore your style ;w; i'm sure with more practice and PATIENCE i could make amazing comics like this too. xD but for now i'm lazy... >w>;;
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YES. YES. I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOREVER
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Can't wait for the full comic. ^_^ Looking awesome right now.
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I got a bit lost in the second half, but the longer I look the more it makes sense. (Context would probably help a lot!)
About comics, I find myself asking the same question. But you are obviously a lot closer than your self-doubt is perhaps inclined to claim!
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That is awesome. You should definitely do more. And more. And more.
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woahhhh
amazing!!
I wanna read Crazy Flush soon!!!! xDDD
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