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NathanWhitaker — Blender Project: WSL Unfinish
Published: 2009-07-03 00:52:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Full name:Blender Project: Whitaker's Studios Logo Unfinished
Been working on my logo for Whitaker's Studios, not finished yet, still have to add "STUDIOS" in there and add the animation. I post the link to the animation on the final render.
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Wow, I like the 3-D-ness of it all, very cool 
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Thanks it was made in a 3D program called Blender.
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I like the style, but it somehow loses its charm towards the end of the word. The wacky proportions and such all but vanish with the last three letters. The S looks especially weird, since the whole thing feels somewhat organic, but the S is denied its curves, which kind of contradicts. And a few more 'accessories', like the little circle, might be interesting, too, to make it more lively, though I suppose the animation will do a lot of that work, too.
Also, sidenote, the S looks like it's missing a ledge... thing at the top. Like you inset a face too many. Is that intentional? It kind of breaks the style.
All in all, though, very nice.
PS, when I saw the thumbnail I thought it was a cartoony city
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Thanks for the critique. You are right the last three letter do lose the style (around that time there were several people in the room being annoying and made me lose my focus) show I started being "cheap" and cutting corners. To be honest I not all thrilled with the K either, but more over, I was having trouble keeping the rounded faces on the S (again I wasn't focusing and I now have a very simple solution to this) so I had to resort to that blocky composition. Same thing with the r but I am going to redo it, I don't like the lower case. I am also going to redo the E into a rounded version like the dot in front of the H and i. As for the accessories I was going to add the worlds "STUDIO" in a different font. The animation is going to focus on the "Whitaker's" part and blur everything else in the background and foreground; then it will turn it attention onto the "STUDIOS" part and blur everything else including the "Whitaker's". Finally the entire screen will come into focus and fade out or perhaps I'll just fade out without the focus.
As for the missing ledge, it is there but the light makes it appear the same color as the ground, I might make it darker to fix that.
Once again thanks for the critique.
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That's really cool!
I like the way you started off big, then it got smaller at the end
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