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Published: 2011-07-17 03:03:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 593; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 18
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Description I drew this on a tour bus going through the Appalachian mountains with simple things I had in my purse: a mechanical pencil, click eraser, bic pen, sharpie, white-out pen and a red highlighter. I love the way this came out, it's so raw!

I really don't know why but the song "would?" by alice in chains has always reminded me of samson and it inspired me to draw this..... (I blame my MP3 player).
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Rathika [2011-07-29 01:19:37 +0000 UTC]

The blood/flame bit around him is awesome.

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Navrin In reply to Rathika [2011-07-29 01:22:11 +0000 UTC]

*spiritual aura.

thanks, do you have any input on how to improve/critique anything else? I'm all ears

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Rathika In reply to Navrin [2011-07-29 01:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, his lower torso seems too thin for his upper body, and his left shoulder is too far out, which in turn messes up the upper arm. The right hand looks really bad, especially compared to how good the arm is; I'm thinking that you drew the "hand" bit too broad, connected the thumb too high up, and didn't distinguish all the finger joins. The left hand looks a lot better, probably because it's mostly concealed by hair (great job with the hair, by the way); but still, the fingers seem rubbery, like they bend throughout their length instead of just at the joints.

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