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Astronoe [2012-01-03 19:40:14 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very striking piece. I love that some of the people are blurred, while others are captured sharply. Good choice on setting it in black and white. I think it has tons of depth for a monochromatic piece. It would have been amazing if there was someone at the top of the lighthouse. Very nice composition and subject matter. I love that there are bike riders and walkers. The people seem so different even though they're all cast in shadow. Normally, cloudy skies make a nice backdrop, but you composed a very interesting photo with a fairly blank background. I see you followed the rule of thirds. I wonder how it would look with half of the lighthouse out of frame. Very nice work!
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Navvyblue In reply to Astronoe [2012-01-04 17:13:27 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree that cloudy sky would make this shot more striking. I'll try to shoot again with cloudy sky next time. But catching someone on the top of the lighthouse sounds a little difficult for me. Do you mean a vertical or horizontal half of lighthouse out of frame? Next time, I can try to shoot what you have exactly in mind.
Thank you so much for the critique! I really appreciate it!
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D3R-Spitzel [2012-01-08 15:12:03 +0000 UTC]
I like how the light gives the lighthouse an interesting texture. People on this picture altough are only seen as shadows, they express emotions really well. I would like to sww a little more of the left side and maybe just a little more of that stone floor near the lighthouse.
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Navvyblue In reply to D3R-Spitzel [2012-01-09 19:56:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your comment! I really appreciate it!
Well, as you can from this shot, there is nothing interesting at the left; only the shadows of the hill.
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