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Naxal710 — Fire Red Nuzlcoke - We Fight Together - Part 3
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Published: 2015-04-15 23:03:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Guess who has 2 thumbs and stopped caring about Backgrounds?!I don't know how I feel about this page. On the one hand, there are some panels that I'm REEEEEEEEEALLY pleased with. But on the other hand there's also a good number of these panels that i absolutely HAAAAAAAAAATE!
And I'm really sorry it's taking so long! I've got a lot of drama and crap going on at home, and it's eating all my time. You all know what a jerk life can be!
Oh well, anyway, hope you guys enjoy this page! Epic battle is EPIC!
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Comments: 17
Look at the bright side, Gary. At least your Charmander won't die if he's defeated! XD
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Gotta say, your art is fine (you draw humans surprisingly well - that's something I can't say about too many people out there) but your coloring...sometimes it's fine (like Lyn or Charmander), but many times you have picked the brightest, most eye-burning shades and it's not just good. The last panel here is a great example, that blue background is too bright and similar shade to those pants.
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Thanks! And yeah, the coloring thing is something I really need to work on. I'm mostly a self taught artist, so I tend to not notice things like that? *Shrug*
But thanks for bringing it to my attention! I'll work on improving it!
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Being self taught doesn't excuse ignorance towards details. I'm a self taught artist as well.
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ahhh! good place to stop!
NO, Gary, the reason you lose is because you didn't have potion!
and good thing he didn't...
Looking great so far!
good luck on run and god speed on comic!
I am a bit curious on his past teams XD
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Hey, glad you're enjoying it so far!
Hopefully I'll have more up soon! (Once I get my scanner up and running.)
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Oak kicking them out of the lab to fight, why haven't more people done that in their comics? XD
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Well, i always thought it was wierd that Oak is fine with a battle going on around all of his books and equipment (that I was too lazy to draw). Battles can get kinda hectic. Especially after the first battle in Black and White!
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wait....was that font you were using at the end segoe print? and was your FULL HP and other font impact? looks like we may even use the same font. anyway, so far you got the start going good, hoping to see where you go from here.
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Thanks for the encouragement and criticisms! I REALLY appreciate it (as improving my story telling is the whole goal of this comic)!
And high-fives for same font!
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no problem, glad to hear it'll help
YOU KNOW IT!!
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Thanks! I'm probably gonna attempt backgrounds again in the future. But maybe I'll keep the solid colors for battle scenes. Maybe....
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You're welcome! Best of luck with whatever you decide~
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The attack effects look neat on this page, and anything with Lyn puts a smile on my face.
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Yeah, Lyn is the absolute BEST!!!!
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