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Reupload scan with better one (this time colours is proper) + some changes and text notes
Information bellow have been updated too.
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One more Character for SMOCT2.
!!!Information bellow isn't full and will be updated during August or can be changed till the deadline!!!
I'm going at vacation and return only in August.
And there something strange with colours. This time I scan it in different place than usual (haven't so mush time before vacation). Sigh, it's really bad when you haven't a scanner at home...
Oh, Almost forgot - my English is really crappy!
Status: Spectator
CIVILIAN FORM
Name: Harukayama Yumiko (Yumi-chan, Yumi)
Gender: female
Race/Species: Human, (japanese, a quarter of Russian)
History: She is Vikuna's younger sister and she originally wasn't a senshi. But by the will of fate Yumi met Originall sailor Phoenix and she gave little girl her senshi powers.
Age: 11
Birthday: October, 15th
Alignment(good, evil, neutral?): Good
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone/Shade: Semi-dark
Height: 140sm
Occupation: A student of a primary school
Personality: vigorous, active, likes to tease her older sister a lot (but in truth she admires and wants to be like Viku)
Likes: Curry, Sweets, to tease her older sister
Dislikes: cold and rainy weather
Hobby/Hobbies: active games
SENSHI/CREATURE FORM
Name: Sailor Phoenix
Gender: female
Alignment: good
Home Planet: Earth
Transformation Item: pendant, which changes its length (flexible mounting thread)
Transformation Phrase: Eternal Fire Power make up!
Transformation Sequence Info: Π‘hain at pendant disappears and she put it on her chest. Then original Sailor Phoenix (pink haired girl) hugs her from behind and And she covers with flames, which then become her sailor fuku.
Alter Egos: tecnically none. Original Sailor Phoenix isn't count as alter ego because she can't use Yumiko's body and exists only as intangible being.
Guardian Of: eternal fire of life and rebirth
Abilities: Good phisical form, also similar to her sister can fly and have glass-like bird-type wings.
Attacks:
- eternal fire sphere - she formed around her a fiery sphere with radius 10 meters max. She herself is in the center. The fire burns all the hostility, while for her it is harmless.
- aflame stream - She raises her hands in front of chest, and between them there is a small sphere of fire, which then fires a powerful ray of scarlet flame with long distance.
Weakness: small closed places, being alone
Personality: same as human self
Story & explanation: Long time ago there was a powerful senshi than protect a peace in numerous dimensions. And her name was Sailor Phoenix - a senshi of eternal fire and rebirth. Although simillar to all of us she wasn't an immortal... But her wish to protect was too strong and even after her death her soul remains and Sailor Phoenix will reborn from the ashes. Again and again she travels through different dimensions and search for persons with strong soul and pure heart. She gave them her power and that persons become Sailor Phoenix themselves. And Sailor Phoenix will reborn endlessly.
Original Sailor Phoenix info
Senshi name: Sailor Phoenix
Age: more than 1000+
Eye colour: Magenta
Alignment: Good
Guardian Of: eternal fire of life and rebirth
Skin Tone/Shade: peach
Height: 180 sm
Abilities: She can't fight herself but she can give her senshi powers to certain person.
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I apologize for being stupid... but... if Sailor Phoenix is the girl with yellow hair, who is the girl with long pink/purple hair?
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It will be explained later in story description and partially in Audition when I return from my vacation in August. I just have not free time to translate story part per now...
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Ah, I see. Can't wait!
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Pretty nice!
Grammar and Spelling Errors {get to them when you have the chance}:
A pupil of primary school - You might want to change pupil to student, also there needs to be an a between of and primary; basically saying A student of a primary school.
With 'semi-dark' as a skin tone, do you mean she is 'tanned'? or maybe 'lightly tanned'?
She's the guardian of eternal fire of life and reborn, did you mean either reincarnation or rebirth with 'reborn'?
You might want to explain the colored wings, as soon as you can.
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Thank you!
1. ok, I'll fix it.
2. about skin colour - it is not a tan, but a natural skin tone, darker than usual, but not completely dark/black. Translator gave me this variants, but I'm not sure wich one is more suitable - swarthy, dusky, swart, grimy
3.I will add more information later, when I return from vacation (about wings too). I just not sure will I have free time to do it before I leave...
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You're welcome.
1. Okay.
2. Ah, okay. Semi-dark works, now that I understand.
3. I know you'll expand once you have the chance.
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