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NightMargin — Margin: chapter 1 part 1
Published: 2012-08-09 05:45:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 13313; Favourites: 336; Downloads: 324
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Technically it's kind of a cutscene/prequel thing but you get the idea!First part of Margin. (sorry it's kind of short!)
Next part coming sometime in the near future.
Music is mine
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Wow.
This could really make up a really nice visual novel once its completed
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intriguing way of bringing reader in, nice visuals and just interesting way of story telling.
do you happen to have nintendo ds? because there is this game called '999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors' and this story youre telling reminds me of the way this game is formatted with the narrative, it's also a unique game.. this reminds me of it, if you have time definitely check it out.
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My only suggestion is to allow the user to advance the slide with the arrow keys. But really nicely done! yay
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oh lordy I've been trying to get that to work for ages! sadly to no avail...
do you have any suggestions/tutorials? *A*!!!
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GOOGLING FOR THIRTY SECONDS FOUND ME THIS
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i use as2 idk what you use
good luck soldier!
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Heey that's the one I tried!
Couldn't get it to link up with scenes though...
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Oh my god, this is actually amazing. I really do love it <3 your so very talented!
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omfg
this, my friend, is amazing. i love it very much, even if it's only the begining of the story.
i love it, the music is great, the art is great, everything is great!
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wow that was AMAZING!! i really got into the story and its really moving in a way
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hehe no worries!! cant wait to see more~~!!
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aaaa thank you so much! ;u;
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woah this is so awesome how are you so talented omg
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Intriguing opening, but I wouldn't have so many clicks. It's annoying to have to click for every little action. Figure out what's necessary, or what would make a good pause in the story, and then delete the extraneous.
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What do you mean by "clicks"? like the sound that the buttons play? or the buttons themselves?
I can easily disable the sounds, but I'm not sure if I can take away the buttons in a visual novel?
Thanks for the feedback!
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I mean the number of times I physically have to click the mouse. I shouldn't have to push the button as many times as you have in this chapter. A lot the smaller actions can be connected under one click instead of divided up among several.
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ooh, any recommendations on how I can do that?
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Just look for series of actions you can string together, like a series of small camera moves or small actions that shouldn't need clicks in-between. It's up to you how to group them, but as director and editor, it's all about how you see you project being seen by the audience.
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ooh I see what you mean now!
I've actually been trying to figure all that intricate actionscript stuff with little success, if you can recommend any good resources on the subject matter I will be forever in your debt
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Google, my friend, and YouTube as well. There are lots of free tutorials everywhere. : )
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Oh believe me, I have scoured the earth for all kinds of visual novel related tutorials to little avail. You know how you're looking for that one very specific thing and it's never there? Like for the moment I'm actually more worried about the REALLY basic stuff like syncing multiple audio files, manual panning, and text effects. (I've actually found a way to do some pretty cool text effects but the setup process was pretty messy so that's a bummer!)
how do people code entire games in flash
how do people code
how do
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Have you looked for the tutorial under a more basic name? Maybe what you're looking for is in a more Flash 101 type tutorial.
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man this is awesome. I've always wanted to do something like this!!! very nice!
Did you compose the music yourself? What program do you use..?
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Wow this is really amazing. Great job Night. Can't wait for the next part.
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Wow... for some reason this is give me astral project feel
Well done Night :3
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Ah, yes, it could be a bit longer. But the fact that it's short makes everyone want more! Well done as usual, Miss Night. I look forward to the next installment!
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Woah... I love the beginning-of-video-game feel to it, with the Protagonist, and the speach box at the bottom... And the feeling of curiosity, learning, but not minding that you don't know all of what's happening... fantastic!! And it's all so beautiful, that cold, bright world...
The music is so chillingly beautiful. I don't feel scared listening to it, but it's haunting. Powerfully dark, yet simple and magical.
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The music set the mood and atmosphere just perfectly along with the drawings. It was a wonderful balance of artwork and suspension.
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omg night, once againg you did it
i do really can't wait to see what's next :3:
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oh man oh man oh man this is looking pretty cool!
seriously can't wait for more! aaaaaaaaaa
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'-' Hm....*favorites* not sure what to say, but I can't wait to see more. Short and sweet. XD
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=w= I just stayed at the end for a min to listen to the wonderful music.
Is it just me or does the clicks remind you of a ticking clock?
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"And the protagonist is dying."
That is a good hook. x'D <3 Wonderfully compelling start. Well done on the accompanying music, too!
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