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Ok whew my movie marathon just ended so I can update it now.

This is the second page of my first comic. I'm really new to drawing cartoons and comics so if you have any areas which you think could use improvement please let me know. The more constructive criticism the better for me since I know that I could use the advice.

I sketched the whole thing in pencil before inking it and then coloring it with marker. I then used iPhoto and Comic Life to apply the though bubble and words as well as adjust the colors a tad so the comic shows up better. Sadly my scanner really butchered the colors of this one and kept doing this weird reflective thing on parts of the black outlines so I had to toy around with the colors in iPhoto more than I wanted to. The are of the background in the 3rd panel where it looks a little sparse is due to my purple marker dying on me halfway through the panel. So expect the next pages to be in colored pencil or a mix of marker and colored pencil.

My favorite panel is definately the last one, I just love the pose as well as Durb looking terrified in the background.
My least favorite panel is the third, my marker died on me making the background look horrible and I feel like I had some trouble with perspective.

Page 1: [link]

Oh and I almost forgot...
Scythe, her armor, and Durb belong to me.
Irkens and Sir units belong to Jhonen Vasquez.

Description
Ok whew my movie marathon just ended so I can update it now.

This is the second page of my first comic. I'm really new to drawing cartoons and comics so if you have any areas which you think could use improvement please let me know. The more constructive criticism the better for me since I know that I could use the advice.

I sketched the whole thing in pencil before inking it and then coloring it with marker. I then used iPhoto and Comic Life to apply the though bubble and words as well as adjust the colors a tad so the comic shows up better. Sadly my scanner really butchered the colors of this one and kept doing this weird reflective thing on parts of the black outlines so I had to toy around with the colors in iPhoto more than I wanted to. The are of the background in the 3rd panel where it looks a little sparse is due to my purple marker dying on me halfway through the panel. So expect the next pages to be in colored pencil or a mix of marker and colored pencil.

My favorite panel is definately the last one, I just love the pose as well as Durb looking terrified in the background.
My least favorite panel is the third, my marker died on me making the background look horrible and I feel like I had some trouble with perspective.

Page 1: [link]

Oh and I almost forgot...
Scythe, her armor, and Durb belong to me.
Irkens and Sir units belong to Jhonen Vasquez.