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Published: 2011-06-20 00:54:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 36886; Favourites: 274; Downloads: 456
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Description Getting this page to you was a disaster. The page I totally messed up during the final stage was much better. Oh boy. Traditional media.

I don't want to talk about it. I'll probably edit it tomorrow.

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Copic multiliners, white gel pen, Copic markers, cheap paint, and pencil.

Fenris, Hawke (c) Bioware
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Comments: 55

laLouveH [2012-12-15 18:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Hawke should keep the hair off He is more................ hot >:3.
Finally, this is just my opinion

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OhLis [2012-10-04 21:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe someone already asked you, but... Is it REALLY traditionall art? I mean how did you draw this? It looks a 'bit digital. I'm not a prof. so don't judge me too much ^___^

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notationn In reply to OhLis [2012-10-05 03:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I was working abroad and I didn't have access to a tablet (or even a computer good enough to run most art programs). Nothing is digital except for the text.

There's a tutorial in my gallery as well.

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OhLis In reply to notationn [2012-10-06 19:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanx! I'll take a look

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neria10 [2012-09-09 19:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Awww .poor fen, soaked and sad.
Friggin love this comic!!

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Ashen-Phoenix [2011-10-18 15:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Fenris looks so small/vulnerable here. I just wanna hug him! You do it, Hawke!

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Lillyan-Fey [2011-06-26 16:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Totally agreeing with Amanda! Just want to do everything to make him happy again q.q

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AmandaKitswell [2011-06-26 00:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I love seeing Fenris dripping wet... especially the way you draw it... it's just so... ugh...

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notationn In reply to AmandaKitswell [2011-06-27 21:14:28 +0000 UTC]

I should do a pinup of him in rain or something....

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TheSylverLining In reply to notationn [2011-09-03 23:45:30 +0000 UTC]

... Breaking my awed silence once more to affirm that this is a wonderful, wonderful idea.

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AmandaKitswell In reply to notationn [2011-06-27 21:17:18 +0000 UTC]

If you did, I'd so buy it. I'm not even kidding. ^.^

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TwilightHellsong [2011-06-23 07:43:07 +0000 UTC]

And it's the moments like this that keep me from wanting to kick Fenris in the shins - when he gets all sweet, and, well, that. Kind of a reminder not to kick him because he's already been kicked and that's why he was snarling to begin with.

Also, they're going to need a mop. And some towels. Soggy elves for the win, yes?

Preceding disaster or not, the page is awesome. And...I had something else to say here, but Imat's very shapely legs are rather distracting. Ahem. Shiny puddle, tasty collarbones, realistically wet hair...there's actually a ton of distractions on this page. And there goes my brain. I hope things go better next time - since disasters hardly ever come up fun.

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notationn In reply to TwilightHellsong [2011-10-19 01:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Oop, didn't see this comment! Yeah, that's basically how I feel about it. Sometimes people will surprise you if you give them the courtesy of some time to reflect . You get enough hints that he's sweet, just got to let him prove it sometimes!

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Rana-E [2011-06-22 11:39:49 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! I...ahhh
wha..

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RogueofAsgard [2011-06-22 02:12:19 +0000 UTC]

i feel as though i should tell you that this page had one hell of an effect on me. its so beautiful and so .... wow. the vulnerability that is happening. gods... oh Fenris. I just want to hug him.

have i told you that i absolutely adore you and this comic? let it be known that i do.

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notationn In reply to RogueofAsgard [2011-06-27 21:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really appreciate it . I try not to make Fenris come across as too vulnerable, but it's those little moments in the game that make me treasure him. I'm hoping I got the balance all right in the comic.

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CryoFantasist [2011-06-21 10:48:34 +0000 UTC]

awww poor Fenfen

somehow though, I imagine Imat saying in the last panel "you're getting rain on mah carpet yo!" :U

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notationn In reply to CryoFantasist [2011-06-27 21:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Orana will take care of that~!

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CryoFantasist In reply to notationn [2011-06-28 11:01:02 +0000 UTC]

or Bodahn, although I'm pretty sure Sandal could/would make something out of it XD like an enchanted... cloak?

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Shaleene1 [2011-06-21 01:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Everytime I see one of your updates to this comic I get a stupid dumb grin on my face and you never seem to disappoint.

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notationn In reply to Shaleene1 [2011-06-21 14:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really appreciate that!

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Shaleene1 In reply to notationn [2011-06-22 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh and thank you for making fenris short, that whole elves as tall as humans thing in da2 just pisses me off LOL

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ToddFan [2011-06-21 00:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Poor wet Fenris. Excellent art, as always *_*

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Aelfwen [2011-06-21 00:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, better shmetter. BEAUTIFUL BODY LANGUAGE FTW

Fenris' hand clasping Imat's arm in the lower right section of the page intensifies his words on a whole 'nother level. Love those subtle additions.

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SaWi93 [2011-06-20 23:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Can I marry you for doing this awesome comic? °^°

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Zara-Arletis [2011-06-20 23:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Yet another awesome page. This needs to be printed and bound . . . Please tell me there is at least one more page ^_^ We so need to see the kiss that hovers on the edge of that last panel!

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notationn In reply to Zara-Arletis [2011-06-21 13:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Yep, there's at least one more, maybe two more pages. I'm still thinking of layouts and it'll depend on how condensed I can make it without being TOO condensed.

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Zara-Arletis In reply to notationn [2011-06-21 17:00:44 +0000 UTC]

joy! you have made my day. just so you know.

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DragonsFeather [2011-06-20 16:14:51 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing as usual. And man, does Imat look good. And so does wet Fenris, looking like a wet puppy. ^^
I know what you're talking about.

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notationn In reply to DragonsFeather [2011-06-21 13:10:08 +0000 UTC]

I didn't realize how difficult it would be to draw someone wet... it's very annoying D:.

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DragonsFeather In reply to notationn [2011-06-21 16:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's clearly not easy... but you did manage very good.

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katjak [2011-06-20 11:09:21 +0000 UTC]

But... But it's a good page?! Artists are always such bad judges of their own work. Probably doesn't help much right now to say that but... Anyway, how about just moving on and seeing later if you still think it needs to be fixed..?

I love the wet wolf look, and their bare feet... Many people seem to like soaking poor Fenris in rain... *cough*

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notationn In reply to katjak [2011-06-27 21:16:06 +0000 UTC]

I keep thinking I should do a rain pinup... so much DA2 art on my list!

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katjak In reply to notationn [2011-06-28 15:50:50 +0000 UTC]

I heartily approve on both counts.

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Chemik91 [2011-06-20 09:20:15 +0000 UTC]

this page is so awesome....

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JMRC24 [2011-06-20 08:52:12 +0000 UTC]

awww... you made my heart bleed for them... this is just soo... awwwww... *sniffle*

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jactinglim [2011-06-20 06:23:47 +0000 UTC]

nice how you conveyed 'soaked from the rain'

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Gillorz [2011-06-20 05:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Those feet are absolutely gorgeous.

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notationn In reply to Gillorz [2011-06-21 13:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Not going to lie, I LOVE feet. I just like the angles on them. They're really hard to draw, though--even harder than hands, I think.

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Gillorz In reply to notationn [2011-06-21 15:17:37 +0000 UTC]

I've never been a particular fan of feet, I think they're kinda gross honestly. xD But, I do like a well-drawn foot, and that's really tough to do. I agree that they are harder than hands to draw. When I try to draw feet they end up looking like broccoli.

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jakface [2011-06-20 05:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Wet Fenris probably smells like wet dog.
But he looks adorable nevertheless. <3 And that puddle IS really well drawn/coloured

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notationn In reply to jakface [2011-06-20 11:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I will take wet dog smell over wet OLD MAN HOUSE smell any day.

Any. Day.

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McNeko [2011-06-20 03:22:41 +0000 UTC]

See that melted puddle over there? I think it's my heart.

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joie [2011-06-20 03:01:26 +0000 UTC]

Updates to this comic always make me happy. It's so lovely.

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Noolin [2011-06-20 02:44:53 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh, soggy Fenris D: someone get him a towel. I know your pain with messing things up at the last minute too but if its any consolation, I think it looks amazing how it is now. I really like the body language between the two in the first frame, it's a little odd to see Fenris so vulnerable looking but it works really well.

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guen20 [2011-06-20 02:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww!

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Nefla [2011-06-20 02:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Well I squee-ed <3 btw the way your draw hands and feet is amazing!

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Sara595 [2011-06-20 02:03:23 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* i hope things are easier next time. and i still like the page

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katiebour [2011-06-20 01:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Imat is tasty :drools:

Half-naked, muscular mage with a little bit of a stubble-shadow, all that delectable body hair and his hair down?

Go get him, Fen! <3

And I don't know why, but I love the gathered ankles of Imat's pants. The way the fabric twists is lovely

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notationn In reply to katiebour [2011-06-27 21:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Imat is based on a character who is supposed to be handsome, so I'm glad other people agree!

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