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JasonPinaster [2016-06-10 00:08:34 +0000 UTC]

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So first things, first, unless requested for a critique, I only say nice things. For a critique, I try to point out the good and the bad.

The first and most obvious thing, and this is always on the good side, the image caught my interest. The pose is striking.

Second, and this is both good and bad, the image held my interest. Good and bad, because my inner critic is engaged in what I like about the image, and what I don't.

So I like the fact that she's looking out over the horizon, readying to explore come what may. I like that she's in a railroad car, coming out into the universe.

But I don't like the fact that I can't see into her eyes. Her boots are well exposed as is her jacket, but I can't see any detail on her shorts. Her legs are very white and with the fishnet stockings come out as overexposed and too high contrast. The angle of shooting make her breasts look small and oddly shaped.

But I like her angular features and resolute stare. Her hair is perfectly exposed and frames her face, drawing my eye into this, the most essential element of the image.

In short, Andry, bravo! Keep shooting.

Jason

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