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JasonPinaster [2016-06-26 20:01:57 +0000 UTC]

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I stopped at this photo because I'd previously critiqued the lack of detail on her shorts. Now all the blacks, especially in her shorts (are they shorts or an extra wide belt e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>?) have detail inside. So this lets me see into the entire image.

The bottom of her crotch is hidden which adds mystery and class.

Also very good is the S-curve which leads the eye of the viewer up her body.

The way her left hand grips the door handle is good, but I'm at a loss as to what has happened to her other hand.

Whatever is going on with the lining/white thingie on the left side of her jacket is distracting; this should have been photoshopped out.

While the S-curve is good, it draws me up to her face where her expression, especially her eyes, is odd. I have no idea what she's looking at and the expression on her lips is vague. Why is she on a rail car? Could you have elevated yourself so that she'd be looking into the camera?

All in all--good photography. Keep shooting!

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untuox [2016-08-30 18:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic angle, great shot!

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