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NullifiedKnight — Counting Clocks
Published: 2010-05-07 12:05:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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One in the morning,my world is alive.
Two in the morning,
is when I thrive.
Three in the morning,
winding down.
Four in the morning,
not a sound.
Five in the morning,
stir in my sleep.
Six in the morning,
floor meets my feet.
Seven in the morning,
read through some arts.
Eight in the morning,
day finally starts.
Nine in the morning,
doing okay.
Ten in the morning,
trudging away.
Eleven in the morning,
Feeling awake.
Twelve 'o clock noon,
mandatory break.
One 'o clock afternoon,
still full of pep.
Two 'o clock afternoon,
slowing my step.
Three 'o clock afternoon,
bored and alone.
Four 'o clock afternoon,
heading back home.
Five in the evening,
back in my room.
Six in the evening,
put on some tunes.
Seven at night,
take a shot at some writing.
Eight at night,
turn on some lighting.
Nine at night,
feeling kind of tired.
Ten at night,
had coffee, I'm wired.
Eleven at night,
chatting with friends.
Twelve 'o clock midnight,
it all starts again.
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Comments: 5
the pleasure is mine (though still unintentional)
this is quite the bit, Frank, beautiful in its sequential sway. this is they way i live as well, so of course, it hit me hard. wonderful as always. (seven is a good time to write).
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I'm very glad you like it, Sara, and I'm glad you agree.
Thank you, as always, for the kind words. You do wonders for a worried writer.
(Although now that I think about it, I often find my muse cheating on seven o'clock with ten.)
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Sounds a bit vicious cycle-ish.
It flows really well and it's amazing how much you convey through such short lines
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A most vicious cycle indeed! And thank you!
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