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Published: 2010-09-26 01:20:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Life is a puzzle and I'm just a piece,life is a book and I'm caught in the crease,
life is a car and I've run out of gas,
but life is just Uno, and I've just been passed.
I still haven't been where I thought I would be,
I still haven't seen what I hoped I would see,
I still haven't done what's important to me,
but I know I still can if I still believe.
Some things that I've valued have wandered away,
some things that I've planned have been set back a day,
some things that I've paused have decided to play,
but some things I've let go before I was betrayed.
As my life goes it hasn't been the worst,
as my life goes I've rarely placed first,
as my life goes it's for knowledge I thirst,
but as my life goes I may have been cursed.
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Comments: 6
fiction-freak [2010-09-26 23:18:57 +0000 UTC]
Simple but perfect.
The introduction was brilliant but it made me laugh and I'm not sure if that's what you intended...
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NullifiedKnight In reply to fiction-freak [2010-09-27 00:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh, and thanks for the +fav
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NullifiedKnight In reply to fiction-freak [2010-09-26 23:59:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
And definitely intended! I'm glad you enjoyed it fic
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fiction-freak In reply to NullifiedKnight [2010-09-29 09:23:35 +0000 UTC]
Welcome, it was a great read and worth two fav's
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NullifiedKnight In reply to MagicInMe [2010-09-26 02:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much!
And thank you for the +fav as well!
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