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NullifiedKnight — Winding Path
Published: 2010-09-24 05:06:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description A tightness in the heart and soul,
feeling empty, lone and cold,
wishing it would simply pass,
before you go do something rash.

It's just a broken heart young man,
buck up, steel, and take a stand,
forget the darkness of tonight,
and look to dawn's embracing light.

She was special to you, I can see,
but she wasn't what you really need,
so let love come and let love go,
and when it's really real, you'll know.

When that time comes, you'll take her hand,
and know that this was all as planned,
a winding path to bring you there,
to a happy life of love and care.
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Comments: 8

nighttimebeautiful [2010-10-05 17:43:21 +0000 UTC]

self therapy suits you just fine, might i say.
more than just fine, actually.

"so let love come and let love go"
that made everything i know of love melt away.

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NullifiedKnight In reply to nighttimebeautiful [2010-10-05 22:29:34 +0000 UTC]

A friend of mine came up with one of the
most interesting analogies I've heard.

Love is like picking a lightbulb.
-Too dim, and it will be changed out.
-Too bright, and it will burn out quickly.
-Just right, and the light will shine for years to come.
When the right one is found, you'll know.

Maybe not the best analogy, but certainly food for thought.
It's one of my favorite lines, as well. Glad you liked it.

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nighttimebeautiful In reply to NullifiedKnight [2010-10-05 22:58:21 +0000 UTC]

that is quite interesting, and
never has i thought of it quite like
that. thank him/her for me, because
indeed it is food for thought,
something ill be thinking for
some time to come now

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fiction-freak [2010-09-26 23:16:52 +0000 UTC]

"feeling empty, lone and cold," I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but I'll point it out never the less.

We all need a little hope sometimes, whether it comes from ourselves or not.

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NullifiedKnight In reply to fiction-freak [2010-09-27 00:02:42 +0000 UTC]

I originally had alone in there, but it sounded a bit awkward, broke the flow.

And hope is definitely something everyone needs now and then. Thanks

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fiction-freak In reply to NullifiedKnight [2010-09-29 09:20:06 +0000 UTC]

There you go, it does sound better but you never really know

Absolutly, I hope it'll be around for a while

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NullifiedKnight In reply to fiction-freak [2010-09-29 16:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, well played.

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fiction-freak In reply to NullifiedKnight [2010-09-29 22:38:11 +0000 UTC]


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