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Published: 2004-01-17 02:37:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description The day I met you was the day I fell in love
I relished your golden glances
And the sweet nothings
You whispered in my ear

You made me feel cherished, desired
You were once
My everything

Then one day I realized
You had changed
When i looked into your eyes
I no longer saw your love for me
Reflecting in their dark blue depths
And I realized things
Could never
Would not ever
Be the same

And even as I loved you
With all my heart
My very being
I could not just stay
And simply watch
As you fell out of love with me

And as my days and years go by
My yearning for you dims
And yet I love you still
And shall...forever
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Comments: 7

BittersweetLuna [2004-06-30 01:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Now this one...REALLY stings! This one you wrote about my turbulent existence, right? *wink* Great work!

P.S.- Fuck him, cuz' they're NEVER worth the pain we put ourselves through on their account...

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oblivious-devotion In reply to BittersweetLuna [2004-06-30 03:23:07 +0000 UTC]

lol i TOTALLY agree!

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BittersweetLuna In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-07-01 02:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Damn straight!

Down with the males! Arrrgggg!!!!!

Honestly...I could rant about this for days, though I'll kindly spare you and the rest of the world from having to sit through my angry feminist tirade... for now

I'd be lying if I said they didn't affect me...THAT'S the reason I so wish to spork them all!

Grrr!!!

Ok, going now, before I hurt myself.

Have a lovely night!

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Sportygirl04 [2004-01-24 16:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Well very nice work. I don't read alot of peotry but i think thats really good. keep up the good work

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simple-serendipity [2004-01-18 05:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Nice! Kels...I didn't know you could write POETRY! LoL. I love how you're so descriptive! Only one thing I didn't like....
"And the sweet nothings
You whispered in my ear"

The reason I didn't like it is because it's been used so many times. But then again....as said by the famous Megan....."that's why cliches(spelling?) are cliches, because they're so true that people have no choice but to use them." Well.....she didn't say exactly that....but it was along those lines. LoL. Nice job though girly! Keep it up!

-Kar

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insomnia-mae [2004-01-18 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]

this is good kelsey....keep writing dear.

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ProfoundDesolation [2004-01-17 02:48:22 +0000 UTC]

you know how i feel about this, my friend...keep it up!

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