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Published: 2004-06-07 21:35:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 21
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Description You say all you want
Is my hand in yours.
You grab it and hold it,
And my spirit soars.

But now that you have me,
I’m no longer bewitching.
I’m there beside you,
But your affections are switching.

I watch as you woo her.
And make your advances.
She knows you crave her.
I die as toward you she dances.

Now I’m alone,
And I curse my devotion
To one such as you,
Lacking true emotion.
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Comments: 28

Largo-sensei [2004-07-02 03:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Definitely nice. Truly captured emotion. Props from me!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Largo-sensei [2004-07-02 03:47:31 +0000 UTC]

thanx bunches and bunches!

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BittersweetLuna [2004-07-01 02:07:41 +0000 UTC]

But o' course, z' chicky!

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BittersweetLuna [2004-06-30 01:40:05 +0000 UTC]

MY, can I relate to this scenario! Emotion...

Awesome work!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to BittersweetLuna [2004-06-30 03:19:25 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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Odd1 [2004-06-17 14:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Love it.......great lines!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Odd1 [2004-06-21 03:50:53 +0000 UTC]

thanx so much!

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Odd1 In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-06-21 13:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey no prob.

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Englishlunatic [2004-06-09 19:27:53 +0000 UTC]

That's a good one mate

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Englishlunatic [2004-06-21 03:56:01 +0000 UTC]

thanx bunches

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dearjohn [2004-06-08 15:14:49 +0000 UTC]

nice job kels, this is awesome.

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oblivious-devotion In reply to dearjohn [2004-06-08 15:18:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks bryce

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dearjohn In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-06-08 16:44:45 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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ProfoundDesolation [2004-06-08 04:48:00 +0000 UTC]

nice job, my friend!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-06-08 04:54:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-06-08 02:11:15 +0000 UTC]

this is deffinately my favorite of all of your works... nice job kelsey. I like it

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-06-08 02:31:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you luke....but just so you know you spelled "definitely" wrong, lol and thanx a bunch and a bunch for the fav

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-06-08 02:39:26 +0000 UTC]

salright I speel lotsa thangs worng. jk

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-06-08 02:39:23 +0000 UTC]

salright I speel lotsa thangs worng. jk

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-06-08 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]

haha

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the-beuks [2004-06-07 22:58:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like this a lot, Kelsey. I relate to the last two stanzas especially (hehe)... as for a name, how 'bout calling it "My Love Repayed"?

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oblivious-devotion In reply to the-beuks [2004-06-07 23:02:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you. I'll think about the title you suggested! I need to "brood" over it,lol

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simple-serendipity [2004-06-07 22:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow Kels! Amazing!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to simple-serendipity [2004-06-07 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]

thanx a bunch karlee-barlee!

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insomnia-mae [2004-06-07 22:06:10 +0000 UTC]

that is amazing Kelsey!! I LOVE IT! a definite favorite!! MUCHO GREATO! LOL

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oblivious-devotion In reply to insomnia-mae [2004-06-07 22:30:16 +0000 UTC]

lol tress....muchas gracias

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hoolien [2004-06-07 21:38:02 +0000 UTC]

wow..........................thats GREAT!!!! ^^

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oblivious-devotion In reply to hoolien [2004-06-07 21:40:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you SO SO much!

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