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oblivious-devotion — The Endless Night
Published: 2004-04-19 00:21:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description The blackness,
pressing,
sufocating,
unrelenting,
never ceasing.

The shadow dampening my spirit
Makes all dark and weary.
The repetition,
The absurdity
of a life without purpose.

An inpetetrable darkness
Surrounds my dismal life.
There is no light at the end of the night.
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Comments: 10

the-beuks [2004-06-05 05:45:16 +0000 UTC]

You... how... I mean, this is... *forgets how to use words*

These poems are Amazing (with a capital A)! Keep it up!

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insomnia-mae [2004-04-20 03:42:20 +0000 UTC]

nice on kelsey!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to insomnia-mae [2004-04-20 22:35:08 +0000 UTC]

thanx tressa mae

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ProfoundDesolation [2004-04-20 03:25:41 +0000 UTC]

snap, kelsey...another great one

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oblivious-devotion In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-04-20 22:35:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much i love you meg!

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-04-19 00:45:19 +0000 UTC]

I agree, great vocabulary and imagery, nice work kelsey

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oblivious-devotion In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-04-19 01:03:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks luke

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-04-19 02:06:38 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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homesick-alien [2004-04-19 00:27:27 +0000 UTC]

this is really nice..you have a vocabulary that urges imagery into the mind..well done

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oblivious-devotion In reply to homesick-alien [2004-04-19 01:02:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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