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okamiwind — man with wings-help
Published: 2006-07-01 16:04:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 254; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 13
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so, this is the same picture that i submitted a while ago, ezcept i made the wings more detailed, as suggested to me by someone....who i forgot. ^.^; uhm, i made a copy and just drew on that, so yes, you can still see the original lines i made. plase tell me if this lookes semi better than the other one [link]wings done in like, 10 minutes at 2 a.m.- i know they're crap so don't tell me that the left wing looks crappier than the right- i know. i also know the fact that i started the wing in sharpie but that didn't work out too well. i need a very thin sharpie. oh, and the scanner cut off the wings for some odd reason....so this deviation has a lot of things wrong with it. but i submitted it bcause i don't know how many people actually check out my scraps, and i really need to know if this looks better than the original.
later to be moved to scraps/replaced.
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wait ,why do the shoulders annoy you? how was the sleepover?
...iforgot my name again....i'll never remember it.... Escalus was it?
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There not far out enough D: rarw
It was much fun
Yes, Prince Escalus
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I believe it was I who suggested it.
Now his wings look a great deal better, but his body needs to be more detailed now, too. Otherwise it won't look right. Sorry.
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'skay, it's just i'm trying to think of how i could make the body better, and i'm lost. i can make the hair more detailed...but the body....i'm not a man...nor do i have a boyfriend XD to have any idea how to make it more detailed. ^.^; but i'll try!
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i really liked the simplicity of the other one
i really dont think that you needed to do much with it... i liked it how it was.. but then again, i really like simple things so... >.>
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heh. ^^ thanks. are you still up North? 'cuz my mom needs to talk to your mom.
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i am home!!! O______O what do our mothers need to talk about???
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if they want to come up north with us..'cuz we kinda need an extra car XP....they already talked so it's ok. ^^
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yeah 
so.... >.>
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*remembers* going off of evan's comment, maybe just simplify this. instead of adding in so many feathers, try to minimize the feather count to make the wings appear simpler, yet still have some to get the point across that yes, they are wings (for those who didn't know before ^^)
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great idea! a compromise! i remember drawing them and thinking "gah!! too....many...little....feathers.....:death:" lol thanks! i'll work on it. ^^
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i love to compromise. everyone gets what they want. everyone is happy ^^ you're very welcome. i love you ^^ anything for ann!! 
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hmmmmm...if you make the wings mroe detailed and darker they might turn out better. Use the scanner options to make them darker. Also i do like the other picture, the wings looked good, its just you couldnt tell they were wings. With these though you can.
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ok, that's what i thought too. that was just a rough sketch. like, really rough. the final will be better
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i hope so...i really like the picture
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i think that if you make the wings more detailed you have to make the man more detailed....the other one was better because the art was consistent throughout the drawing
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thanks! CODGRADS ON YOUR TEST!!!! (aaron told me) 
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soo bored....thanks for teh glomp!
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thanks...hey...we could definately hang out at some point now...like today or tomorrow!
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today.....i'm not really doing anything...tomorrow....i have a party... but there is no one at my house. so i have no rides or anything. and there are things i need to get done. but once i'm done..maybe we could do something
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....i forgot the "n".....>.> it's too early to spell correctly
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