eleical In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 23:20:12 +0000 UTC]

So powerful! Love it.

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oldest-boy In reply to eleical [2008-10-31 00:16:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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eleical In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-31 02:50:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ShadowUsul22 In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 23:12:41 +0000 UTC]

If only recyled love was real, the haiku is amazing and pretty true.

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oldest-boy In reply to ShadowUsul22 [2008-10-31 00:16:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Shay123 In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 23:12:24 +0000 UTC]

This is both sweet and beautiful!
In fact it's the best haikuI've ever read~!
hehehehe
but then again I also don't read them very much >.>
Either way this poem is lovely.

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oldest-boy In reply to Shay123 [2008-10-31 00:17:06 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks.

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Shay123 In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-31 00:40:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3
By the way~ Sorry if I rambled a bit! XD
I tend to do that a lot without noticing so I'm apologizing now just in case

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oldest-boy In reply to Shay123 [2008-10-31 00:40:35 +0000 UTC]

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scorchdady In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 22:58:06 +0000 UTC]

WEll
I
LOve
THis!!!

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oldest-boy In reply to scorchdady [2008-10-31 00:18:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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MetalShadowOverlord In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 22:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Dude, I've been spreading love and joy (or trying to at least) since High School. (I was home schooled most of my life and didn't interact with anyone until I attended an actual high school)

Spreadin' the love through the power of embrace!

Great job! This deserves a DD!

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oldest-boy In reply to MetalShadowOverlord [2008-10-30 22:50:57 +0000 UTC]

I dropped out 4 days into 9th grade, i can identify with the lack of social smothering.

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MetalShadowOverlord In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-30 23:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, 9th grade was that bad huh? High school treated me rough too...

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oldest-boy In reply to MetalShadowOverlord [2008-10-31 00:20:11 +0000 UTC]

selling drugs was more appealing,

but it lead to me
getting shot 5 times,
go figure.

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MetalShadowOverlord In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-31 00:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow...why did you go and start doing that?

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oldest-boy In reply to MetalShadowOverlord [2008-10-31 00:26:08 +0000 UTC]

more or less,

born into it,
and money hungry
poluted by a
"gangster" mentality.

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MetalShadowOverlord In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-31 19:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice mini poem. I won't drag the past out of you (shouldna asked so many questions in the first place) but at least you're out of it now.

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oldest-boy In reply to MetalShadowOverlord [2008-11-01 18:30:29 +0000 UTC]

word.

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Xovvo In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 22:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Very good. Very clever.
Keep up the good work.

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oldest-boy In reply to Xovvo [2008-10-30 22:51:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I'll try.

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Xovvo In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-30 23:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Prego.

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oldest-boy In reply to Xovvo [2008-10-31 00:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Orale'

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Dya-mond-ay In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 22:31:04 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS <3

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oldest-boy In reply to Dya-mond-ay [2008-10-30 22:40:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you,
it loves you too.

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alexcherrypicks In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 22:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Great

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oldest-boy In reply to alexcherrypicks [2008-10-30 22:40:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you,

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universe-of-doodles In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so clever!!

Well done!

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oldest-boy In reply to universe-of-doodles [2008-10-30 22:43:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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RomanticDetective In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 21:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome ^^

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oldest-boy In reply to RomanticDetective [2008-10-30 22:43:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you, very much.

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Taisi-san In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 21:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet. ^^

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oldest-boy In reply to Taisi-san [2008-10-30 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

I agree, thanks.

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counterfeit-lie In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 20:18:18 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful. put a smile on my face.

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oldest-boy In reply to counterfeit-lie [2008-10-30 22:44:19 +0000 UTC]

that's a wonderful feeling.

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myxchemicalxkiss In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 20:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

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oldest-boy In reply to myxchemicalxkiss [2008-10-30 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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GRODSPEED In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 20:01:11 +0000 UTC]

your ability to create strong poetry and let it flow = greatness. :]

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oldest-boy In reply to GRODSPEED [2008-10-30 22:44:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you, so much.

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GRODSPEED In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-31 15:29:03 +0000 UTC]

y'welcome ^^

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PoetryOD In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 19:53:38 +0000 UTC]

the category is called haiku and eastern -a haiku not about nature is called a senryu - another eastern type isnt it? So its not categorised wrong.

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oldest-boy In reply to PoetryOD [2008-10-30 22:45:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you, flutterings

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brittmiscast In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 19:47:23 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful... I love Haikus.

Their simplicity really allows the power to flow.

I hope more poems and literature came be DD'd more often!

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oldest-boy In reply to brittmiscast [2008-10-30 22:45:24 +0000 UTC]

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CookiemagiK In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 19:42:57 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful! ^^

and congrats on the DD

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oldest-boy In reply to CookiemagiK [2008-10-30 22:45:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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RobinClone In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 19:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Simple & powerful. I love it.

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oldest-boy In reply to RobinClone [2008-10-30 22:46:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Mollinda In reply to ??? [2008-10-30 19:24:52 +0000 UTC]

This made me cry - it makes me think of fangirls throwing their hearts at people who don't even know they exist and the people who matter withering and dying nearby.

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oldest-boy In reply to Mollinda [2008-10-30 22:46:29 +0000 UTC]

i had similar sentiments in writing this.

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