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You are a wanderer.A nomad. No home, no family.
Nowhere you belong.
You are destined to walk forever, searching.
Searching.
Until you find...
What is it you were looking for again?
Do you even remember any more?
Does it even matter?
That's right...
You were trying to find yourself.
But you lost it,
so long ago,
amid the stories and the words,
and the fountains of ink,
that ran togeather, the whispers,
of people, places
who never existed.
You lost yourself,
in a Somewhere
that turned out to be a Nowhere,
but not for you, never for you,
because you called it home,
and never left,
and so, here, you wander,
Lost, alone, forsaken,
to search the lands to find yourself,
when you don't exist,
you can't exist,
not here, not now...
Only in your own reality,
do you really know yourself,
and here, you are but a refletion in a pond,
a fading image,
like a photograph,
even to yourself.
You are a wanderer.
Doomed, blessed,
to sail forever amid seas of dreams,
and wander amoung wildflowers
that never existed.
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Comments: 19
szmoon [2007-07-23 03:17:10 +0000 UTC]
The beginning reminds me of Harry. x3
But I guess everything does at the moment.
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omnipotent-lion In reply to szmoon [2007-07-23 03:23:08 +0000 UTC]
Really? Odd. Blue ferret said it remined him of Smeagol. I was thinking of one of my characters---several actually. Chant, amoung them. I have some depressing characters...
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Lynielle [2007-06-17 14:30:36 +0000 UTC]
You were trying to find yourself.
But you lost it,
so long ago,
amid the stories and the words,
and the fountains of ink,
that ran togeather, the whispers,
of people, places
who never existed.
THat's my favourite section. I like this one it's long and epic. It's a good ballad I think it's relatable to alot of people during epochs of their lives. Kudos.
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omnipotent-lion In reply to Lynielle [2007-06-18 18:24:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^_^ Glad you liked it!
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omnipotent-lion In reply to Lynielle [2007-06-18 18:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^_^ Glad you liked it.
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Ashalon [2007-06-14 14:44:50 +0000 UTC]
so, have you finished your search, or still following those empty lanes of life? Just about anyone can appreciate this since we are all searching for ourselves. Lucky and few are those who complete that journey.
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omnipotent-lion In reply to Ashalon [2007-06-14 23:51:29 +0000 UTC]
Very true. However, it does make for nice art.
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Blue-Ferret [2007-06-02 00:15:03 +0000 UTC]
omg..... this.... IS ONE OF THE BEST ! you ve ever written! deserves a fav. this really does match smeagol from lord of rings LOL XD
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omnipotent-lion In reply to Blue-Ferret [2007-06-02 03:53:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow, haha. Thanks. Smeagol, eh? Didn't think of it like that, but cool!
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Blue-Ferret In reply to omnipotent-lion [2007-06-02 14:57:48 +0000 UTC]
LOL xD. yay fer smeagol! lol i actually hate htat character but okay lol.
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omnipotent-lion In reply to Blue-Ferret [2007-06-02 16:58:40 +0000 UTC]
dude, smeagol rocks! No...GOLLUM rocks. He PWNS!
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omgitzmyppl [2007-06-01 07:07:01 +0000 UTC]
wow....i like it. poor traveler! sniff. nice story within a poem. great choice of words.
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omnipotent-lion In reply to omgitzmyppl [2007-06-01 13:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad you like. ^^
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omgitzmyppl In reply to omnipotent-lion [2007-06-01 13:51:12 +0000 UTC]
your welcome! yeah i like it nice job
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