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omnipotent-lion — The Pen of Creation
Published: 2007-02-11 00:04:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 350; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description Find glory
In distant sunsets over nonexistent mountain peaks.
Find peace
In small farm villages and the deep brown eyes of a young girl who never was, and never will be.
Create.
A world so real that it lives
It breaths
It thinks.
A world that shapes itself.
A history, a people.
Become
The warrior, the knight, the queen, the mage.
The peasant, the noble
The mother, the father, the child.
Words appear, as your fingers dart across the keys.
People live, people die. Lovers love, children cry.
Days become weeks, weeks become months.
Names, places, all become real.
Cities, countries, worlds.
Beneath your fingers.
Read by the eyes and heart and mind
Of hundreds, thousands, millions.
Children, adults, dreamers.
Map out a life,
With secrets, and fears, and hope, dreams.
Beneath green, gray, blue, brown eyes.
Feel the racing heart,
As your words become realities.
As the pages turn over and over in loving hands,
And your words, deeds, lives
Rest on bookshelves across the world.
Feel the power
Of playing God.
Of shaping fates and choosing paths.
Of coloring worlds with morning dew and starlit dusks.
Live the lives of many,
Feel your hearts beat as one.
In castles and cottages, across raging seas
In ballrooms with sparkling lights and sparkling eyes.
Dream, believe, create,
Write.
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Comments: 14

selahdreams [2008-01-22 11:52:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm speechless.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to selahdreams [2008-01-23 23:40:22 +0000 UTC]

D'aw, thanks!

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PurpleRoseFairy [2007-04-21 11:25:29 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, I for one couldn't suggest how to make it better...

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omnipotent-lion In reply to PurpleRoseFairy [2007-04-21 15:42:21 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks, i'll definently take that as a compliment.

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Chocabookaholic [2007-03-18 04:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you must think I am a crazy person who favorites everything I read. Not true. I just happen to love everything that your creative mind is producing! This is by far my favorite of what you have written so far. As a fellow writer, I can honestly say these words are very true.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to Chocabookaholic [2007-03-18 17:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I truely appeciate your comments and support ^^

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zardorestinpeace [2007-02-12 02:49:09 +0000 UTC]

well, i really liked this a lot as for constructive critisism i haven't got much, but you said eyes three times and it just sort of sounded repetitive in an awkward way, i mean there's really no way to replace the word it just... i don't know.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to zardorestinpeace [2007-02-12 03:18:15 +0000 UTC]

haha, i know what you mean. thanks for your comments!

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szmoon [2007-02-11 05:04:53 +0000 UTC]

I love it. It's really powerful, don't change anything. <3
It also seems to be your dream. ^^ I will help you in your plans to dominate the world. ^___^

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omnipotent-lion In reply to szmoon [2007-02-11 18:27:16 +0000 UTC]

haha, my mom suggested that ruling the world should go on collage aps.
thank you ^^ comments rock. togeather, with amanda, we shall become the ultimate...cool people. ^________^

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szmoon In reply to omnipotent-lion [2007-02-11 18:44:07 +0000 UTC]

~C>
(tis a mousy)

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omnipotent-lion In reply to szmoon [2007-02-11 19:07:51 +0000 UTC]

...

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phantastus [2007-02-11 03:48:35 +0000 UTC]

I really like it- particularly since it's very similar to the basis of my own continuity. XD Which is... er, based on the idea of people writing stories that become worlds.

Anyway, it's really nice. I don't have much to offer in the way of critique.

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omnipotent-lion In reply to phantastus [2007-02-11 03:52:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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