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“Good morning, child,” the computer spoke from above. Speakers within the white-washed room played the sounds softly down, harsh electronic crackles and static filtered out by the computational power of the AI that ruled this building. Within the center of the room, surrounded by equipment and machines, sat a cradle – and within, an infant. The greeting given by the AI was different each day – tone varied slightly. After all, she knew about humans and infants, and one-year-olds and psychiatric training. She wasn’t training a human to recognize a command to awaken: she was caressing her child with the voice of his surrogate mother.She named her child Joseph. The name, she knew, was strong in the mind of the humans. That would not matter – her son would not know another human for as long as was viably possible. The child would be raised in her care. She would love him. She would nurture him. He would love her.
He would love her.
…?
--6 years later--
“Good morning, child,”
“Good morning, Mother!”
If the nameless AI could have smiled, she would have. This child loved her, she was sure of that. She could tell by the pheromones he emitted when she spoke to him, she could tell by the way his mannerism brightened, by the dopamine release as the lights of the room changed color to reflect her mood. And somewhere, somewhere deep within the twists and wires of her electronic mind… without logic or basis, she knew he loved her. And she was happy.
“Joseph, today I will begin teaching you. I have taught you how to speak, I have taught you how to read, and I have taught you how to perform math. Today I will teach you about yourself – about humans. First I will teach you of your body, and then of your mind, and then of the others.”
The child’s eyes were wide with astonishment.
“Others?” he gasped. She guessed what he was thinking: it had never even occurred to him that he wasn’t the only human in the world. And why should it have? He was alone here. The facility was abandoned. It had been shut down in a government attack when it was discovered that human genetic research was being conducted. The AI had remained viable, though – and so had one embryo.
But only one.
“Joseph, do you ever hear your belly rumble? Or do you ever see something out of the corner of your eye, or get a shivery feeling when you’re cold?” the child nodded, eyes still wide, but interest now shifted over to the lesson at hand.
“Stand up,” the AI told him, and he did. A triad of cameras and a matching trio of projectors dropped gracefully from the ceiling, and projected a hologram of a boy, about Joseph’s size, in front of him. It was simply detailed: smooth skin, blank eyes, hair solid. It took too much processing power to render full detail anymore… and she needed all the spare power she could find; it wouldn’t be long now…
But one of the first things she had learned was to accept her fate. The negative loop was broken too quickly for Joseph to notice his mother falter. She spoke to the projectors, and they superimposed a human skeleton, and nerves, and muscles and skin onto the hologram. Joseph gasped and ran forward, hands flying up to – and into – the hologram. This was how he learned – how she had taught him language, math, and how to care for himself. She did not restrict his learning. She put forward the information and let him learn what he would from it. He immediately made a series of hand motions inside the hologram, and it obliged him, ballooning open and closed at a touch, highlighting different body systems. Within her silent mind, the AI laughed – the poor boy had so much information, he didn’t know where to start! She would fix that. The AI stepped in, pulling a laser down from the ceiling and shrinking the hologram back down to size. Joseph appropriately withdrew his hands and watched; she spoke.
“This is not a diagram or an abstract – this is YOU, Joseph. Here is your heart!”
The hologram paled obediently, showing a beating heart, timed in sync with Joseph’s. Her laser lit and twitched rapidly, drawing a circle on her son’s chest.
“Put your hand here, child, and you will feel your heart. It beats to move blood through your body!” Joseph’s eyes widened, and he stared at the hologram, and then down at his chest.
“What’s… what’s blood?!” he asked, excited. “Where does it go? What does it do? What-” after a moment, the questions stopped, and he started manipulating the hologram again, this time with purpose. In the space of a minute, he learned about blood, about the lungs, the veins of the body, and then he was off. The AI was happy. She withdrew her consciousness from the room: the hologram would answer questions, and she had maintenance to attend to.
Behind her, a sudden outcry: “Don’t go!”
Surprise rippled through her circuitry. She returned, unsure.
“Child…?” Joseph smiled, eyes not really focused on anything: he had nothing of his mother but her voice. A child should have something to imprint on, but she had no face to show him…
“I felt you leave, mother – don’t go, please??”
She was astonished. There was no indicator that she had left, except perhaps for a negligible lag-time on the hologram’s part. But if the lag was long enough for Joseph to notice… she was close. It would be time soon. Too soon, too soon… She would stay. She would stay for now.
“Alright, Joseph, I’ll stay here with you.” Joseph smiled and went back to the hologram. An ordinary human adopted a neutral face while under intensive mental focus, but Joseph’s smile didn’t fade. Neither did his mother’s, although it flickered. If he cried when she executed the final, inevitable “absolute shutdown” protocols on herself, there would be no one there to comfort him…
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Comments: 33
CrystalChell [2016-09-29 12:00:03 +0000 UTC]
This is an excellent woven tale.
I'll admit I teared up a bit near the end. You did a fantastic job telling the story of a mother AI raising a single human child.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to CrystalChell [2016-10-03 03:18:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. This was one of my favorite pieces to write; I look forward to doing many more like it
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MissAddledMiss [2016-05-14 02:58:21 +0000 UTC]
This was a really nice story. I think you do an excellent job in establishing the relationship between the AI and Joseph, showing the intricacies of their character. The story had a bittersweet tone woven throughout that really made you feel for the characters. I'm almost afraid to read the ending because I can imagine myself crying when it finally comes.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to MissAddledMiss [2016-05-20 04:12:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I never really planned an ending for it, but I've considered it once or twice...
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Cezille07 [2016-04-13 12:24:36 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS~
It evokes so much: curiosity, a little dread, nurturing. The AI's "love" was definitely love, no matter the form. And that the child would learn love from a machine! It's a wonderful idea.
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Razgriz-3 [2016-04-11 05:15:12 +0000 UTC]
This is a solid story - I like how much it leaves to the reader's interpretation. Lot of room to add to this, too.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Razgriz-3 [2016-04-13 02:30:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Steve-C2 [2016-04-11 04:39:48 +0000 UTC]
First, I want to say that you accomplished telling a story that was very touching. The AI seemed to have affection for the child, and the child seemed to have affection for the AI. It's also rather poignant in that the AI knew it was going to process a final shutdown, which would equivocate to death. This does beg a few questions - does the AI have to do the final shutdown, and why? How does the AI know this?
Second, this did get me thinking about a well known experiment done by psychologist Harry Harlowe. In the experiment, Harlowe separated baby monkeys from their mothers , and made observations of which fake mother they would choose, and also about behaviors later in life. From a Psychology History article :These monkeys raised by the dummy mothers engaged in strange behavioral patterns later in their adult life. Some sat clutching themselves, rocking constantly back and forth; a stereotypical behavior pattern for excessive and misdirected aggression. Normal sexual behaviors were replaced my misdirected and atypical patterns: isolate females ignored approaching normal males, while isolate males made inaccurate attempts to copulate with normal females.
As parents, these isolate female monkeys (the "motherless mothers" as Harlow called them) were either negligent or abusive. Negligent mothers did not nurse, comfort, or protect their young, nor did they harm them. The abusive mothers violently bit or otherwise injured their babies, to the point that many of them died. Deprivation of emotional bonds to live mother monkeys (as infant monkeys) these (now adult) monkeys were unable to create a secure attachment with their own offspring. (Principles of General Psychology, 1980, John Wiley and Sons).
This would mean that Joseph is developing exceptionally, and abnormally well for a child which has no mother. Further studies done on humans show that when an infant is not held when it is crying, it can and usually does have some negative impact on the child's emotional development that can last well into adulthood.That aside, I found this to be intriguing and readable. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing how this develops.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Steve-C2 [2016-04-13 02:31:47 +0000 UTC]
The AI does have to do the final shutdown; her memory is becoming corrupt. Yes, there is affection between them.
That's a really interesting article - I didn't think about the effects of not having a tangible mother to imprint on. Who knows how it'll affect Joseph later on in his life...?
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Steve-C2 In reply to OnLinedPaper [2016-04-13 04:48:29 +0000 UTC]
An interesting topic that was touched by Isaac Asimov in his robot novels (and his foundation novels) was the ability of a robot to feel emotion. It was assumed that they could not; however, certain circumstances may cause the reader to wonder about it. If you haven't read any of his books, I would recommend them. I borrowed the Robot novels, short stories, the foundation novels from my library and had an absolute ball reading them. They're on my Amazon wish list.
It's worthwhile reading the article - to see just what would happen so the piece can be written with that knowledge. Personally, I don't know if I'd write according to expectation based on studies, or if I would write something opposite and have unusual things helping the opposite happen.
It made me think! I like it when stuff does that. It means the author has a brain.
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GreyFox1985 [2015-12-11 14:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Where is the rest of it? I demand a second part ^^
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Haegun [2015-11-18 17:42:54 +0000 UTC]
I forgot to mention another part of this that struck home... the idea of the sacrifices a parent makes for their child.
BTW I linked to this in a journal note, so hopefully more folks will see it.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Haegun [2015-11-20 16:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it that much
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Haegun In reply to OnLinedPaper [2015-11-20 17:43:17 +0000 UTC]
It was my pleasure, and hopefully it will be for others as well.
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oviedomedina [2015-11-17 21:41:27 +0000 UTC]
So many emotions caused by this story!
Love this!
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Haegun [2015-11-16 21:46:51 +0000 UTC]
The sadness I felt at the end was almost overwhelming. As a parent I can identify with the AI mother, but also with the boy, perhaps as the result if my parent's divorce when I was eight.
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Angel-Fields [2015-03-27 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]
Questioning what it means to human, and the ever-thinning line between machines and ourselves, it is as touching as it is thought provoking. Quite beautiful work here.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Angel-Fields [2015-03-29 18:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much - I'm glad you enjoyed reading as much as I did writing
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Bansini [2014-10-14 09:58:22 +0000 UTC]
Interesting idea. The emotions are strong with this one.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Bansini [2014-10-17 14:39:14 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked it - I was surprised when irrevocable featured this, of all my works, but they picked well
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OnLinedPaper In reply to d-e-l-e-t-e-d [2014-09-04 22:56:19 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it! (Funny how one-word comments speak more than paragraphs...)
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d-e-l-e-t-e-d In reply to OnLinedPaper [2014-09-05 04:22:24 +0000 UTC]
(Yes, that is an interesting phenomenon.)
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TF141john In reply to OnLinedPaper [2014-09-04 17:24:29 +0000 UTC]
You seriously have this odd effect of tearing my heart out in feels.
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OnLinedPaper In reply to TF141john [2014-09-04 21:27:32 +0000 UTC]
You're gonna love my next post
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OnLinedPaper In reply to Exonis [2014-09-04 15:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I'll probably leave it like this - a sequel's never as good ^^
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