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optimisticxpessimist — FAKEMON: Courante DEX

Published: 2009-01-22 05:13:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1482; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 32
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Description critique on the 2nd sugi attempt please and thank you

line art by ~Jenicole
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Comments: 14

TheJaySky [2010-05-16 00:10:49 +0000 UTC]

i love it

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to TheJaySky [2010-05-16 01:28:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TheJaySky In reply to optimisticxpessimist [2010-05-16 01:28:55 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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ArtistTool [2009-01-23 01:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Awe that is so cute! I want one! ^^

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to ArtistTool [2009-01-24 02:49:05 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you ^^

hopefully ill have my own part in a fakemon game at some point, bu i guess well have to wait and see

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Jenicole [2009-01-22 11:47:35 +0000 UTC]

He looks awesome. I especially like the colour scheme.

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to Jenicole [2009-01-24 02:50:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ i like the design. glad you drew him for me ^^

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jemgi [2009-01-22 09:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, but it seems kinda over powered, i.e (Regenerating half of it's health... hmm...)

Also, add some trim of some kind, I.e under belly etc.

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to jemgi [2009-01-23 03:18:02 +0000 UTC]

actually i prefer the current design. it was designed by request and colored by me. ive already changed it a bit but thatll probly be all the change i make to it.

and as for the regenerating, it does tat every 2 - 5 turns, obviously in the latter area for fairness. that would be less often than mistys in-game starmie uses Recover

but yea no trim and the ability is ok. might change the ability later but i like the current one

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jemgi In reply to optimisticxpessimist [2009-01-23 05:42:19 +0000 UTC]

KK fair enough.

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cascade-gonpory [2009-01-22 06:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow! You have improved Good Job! I really like this design! Very creative.. The only thing i would do to IMPROVE it, would be to have some lighting on it's back Just looks a little plain in that area! But SUPER job

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to cascade-gonpory [2009-01-22 06:39:33 +0000 UTC]

ok. added the shadow from the head [i had just noticed id missed that anyway ] and added highlight to the legs and back

thanks again for the critique ^^

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cascade-gonpory In reply to optimisticxpessimist [2009-01-22 12:01:28 +0000 UTC]

tthere you go! Heaps better

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optimisticxpessimist In reply to cascade-gonpory [2009-01-22 06:17:41 +0000 UTC]

OMG thank you!

HUGE compliment coming from you

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