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oracle-of-nonsense — even Death cries out [NSFW]
Published: 2010-10-29 05:04:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 544; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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Description when people destroy people
there are no faces peaceful
with that final exhalation,
limbs oh-so-naturally neatly arranged
to simulate sleep, to allow the belief in better places.

when people destroy people
it looks like road kill,
eye wide, jaws hanging in a fearful snarl,
joints loosened and limbs thrown about
like some demon broke
every
last
bone
and tossed the crumpled mess away.

when people destroy people
their bodies are not beautiful in repose;
they are rudely naked, bone barely covered in flesh,
genitals exposed to shame the souls
of the departed.

when people destroy people
you will never see the pictures of it
in high school textbooks,
you may never see it
at all --
the wide eyes of children
in bullet-holed heads, leaking brains like tears
as mothers sob, raped, shot, shot, shot.
the naked skeletal torso kneeling
in the garbage bin of the forgotten, anonymous dead,
all similar in stripes and starvation.

when people destroy people
for causes not their own,
for reasons they don't understand,
for countries they blindly follow
that is evil.
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Comments: 14

Anarkhos [2011-12-06 23:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, you're a really, really good poet.

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to Anarkhos [2011-12-06 23:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you? Haha

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Anarkhos In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2012-02-07 23:44:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I loved it.

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blondecrsity [2010-11-04 01:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful imagery! It definately makes me want to go out and do something about it.

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to blondecrsity [2010-11-04 01:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm glad.

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Dream-Junkie [2010-11-01 00:15:44 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible. I have to arrange my thoughts just to get it down. You're right... War is terrible and it will continue for as long as we allow it. I'm sick of people dying for... Well, jeez, nothing. So rich people can get richer? So people with a ton of land can get more land. Sad. I love this poem though. You portrayed it well. You spoke the harsh honest truth and did not cover up a thing. Love it

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to Dream-Junkie [2010-11-02 02:53:51 +0000 UTC]

I think the fact that they are dying for nothing is was bothers me the most. They just are, because they get paid, because their governments tell them to, and it makes me sad. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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Dream-Junkie In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2010-11-06 04:53:32 +0000 UTC]

~.~ yeah, its very sad. i doubt, however, there will ever be an end to all of the wars, madness, heartlessness

you're very welcome ^^

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to Dream-Junkie [2010-11-06 17:34:22 +0000 UTC]

So do I. and that just makes it more sad.

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Dream-Junkie In reply to oracle-of-nonsense [2010-11-07 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]

v.v yes, incredibly~
thank you again for writing it

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whitefox00 [2010-10-29 18:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha, nice. It was graphic, but not gory, if that makes any sense. I've probably been desensitised to gore (along with - I'd imagine - a lot of our generation).
I like it. It's a rant, but a good one - not whiny, and of course clear enough to get your point across.

Please don't ever stop writing.

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to whitefox00 [2010-10-30 17:27:00 +0000 UTC]

That does make sense. I definitely haven't.
I'm glad. It's wasn't supposed to be whiny.

I shan't, dear.

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kyotogirl13 [2010-10-29 08:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Truly inspirational.

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oracle-of-nonsense In reply to kyotogirl13 [2010-10-29 16:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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