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Published: 2007-07-28 18:42:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1897; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 31
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Its not entirely complete. I know her hand is a bit small and long. I am also thinking about adding some wings since its a angle.Hope you like it
Reference picture of the girl is from *alreadybroken-stock :
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Tried to fix her hand and arm, and some other small details.
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pretty figure, pretty dress... nice! i think the hands are abit fat.. should be sexier and slimmer.. 
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This is extremely good imagery! You have done a marvelous piece of art here
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Very elegant. The shading has worked very well, and i like the sword too. The filter looks great. I agree with someone else though, the hair is possibly too fluffy... it kinda reminds me of a long-haired cat's fur (no offense meant). And on the arm we cant see, at around elbow height, there is a slight bump in her arm. But those are the only things that look out of place, you are very talented at this
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yep, agree about the hair. Will have a look at it when the time comes. Thanks a lot for your nice comment!
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I would say maybe a 6. I don't know, I'm not very good with "ratings".
She looks like she's missing hips (or her torso is too long and straight), and her rib-cage is undefined.
Her hair is a little unrealistic looking, more "furry" than like hair.
Her hand is a bit small, but that's just my opinion.
I like the sword, and the colours are great.
But as she's the focus of the piece, I just wish her anatomy was a little "better" - the waist nips in around the elbow and the hips on a woman of her shoulder-span would be larger (and therefore more "proportional").
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Georgeous!
But I'll give you here 9 of 10, the sky seems to be a little bit empty...
but the emotion of your deviation is as good as well!
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This is so pretty, I like how it really looks like a watercolour painting. Her face looks so real. Beautiful work
-Elise
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If you are using layers, it might not be that complicated to shorten her arm a little bit.
The texture you added to the image is kinda cool, it adds a bit of traditional flair to the scene.
If the sword is glowing, maybe it should make a slight amount of light on her dress.
I am always for adding wings, so I say go for it! Just make sure they don't block out your sun, it looks good. unless you moved it to the right.
I can't wait to see the finished version, since this one already looks very good!
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Thanks a lot
The dress has a amount of light from the glowing sword. Cant you see that?
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Yes, I can see it, I must've missed something the first time, I really thought that her side was darker than this.
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like it???? i love it!!! it's amazing.... beautiful.... i especially like blazing sword.... :fav+:
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I usually try to stay away from women with weapons for health reasons
Very cool!
I like it.
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Since her other hand is behind her back, there's nothing to suggest that her arm is too long because it's probably just as long as the other one, only the viewer can't see it.
Did that make sense? lol
I love the sword, though. Absolutely magnificent.
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Then they are both to long^^
Thanks for the comment
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lol no problem.
It's a great picture.
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Thanks for the comment
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