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Panzerfire β€” Why I joined the JGSDF

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Description Note: Given the harsh criticism this picture is getting I feel like this project is a very good candidate for an early re-make. So if you want to write down whatever you feel is wrong with the picture, please do so. Constructive criticism is welcome.



For those that don't know, the JGSDF stands for Japanese Ground Self-Defence Force which are the modern military of Japan (While at the same time hilariously not considered a military due to constitutional technicalities).


I wanted to do this for a while 'though originally I wanted to use Kaname Chidori from FMP but then I decided to go with one of my OCs Kahoru Kawasaki (Note that the name might change in the future).

The rifle is the JGSDF standra issue Howa Type 89, and it's a pretty well drawn one.


Like with 's request, I made a bad screw up with the body-head relation and... well... the original lineart at first glance looks ok but when start applying perspective to it, you realize that it look more like a chibby drawing

So again I tweaked the lineart with perspective and scaling two times. One for overall the body and head and then again exclusively for the head as to make it look more appropiate to the angle of sight.

I'm sorta happy with this project but I realize that I still need a lot of practice to make my pin ups look anywhere as good as those of the best artists.

Oh.... And yeah, I said I would be working on that remake of May Liberty smile. The problem is that the project is going to have some 50 aircrafts (More or less) and vectoring each one of them is going to be such a drag. And I already noted that I made a small mistake in the perspective of the aircraft screenshots I'm vectoring. A very good eye will notice but again I might be able to do slight corrections on the final steps as to hide/camouflage any mistakes I'll do during the project. I'll be two weeks with it AT LEAST!

So I might as well dedicate some time with the smaller projects (Unfortunately this is the only one that can be considered small).

Anyway I hope you like this.

See'ya in the Battlefield!
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Panzerfire In reply to ??? [2010-08-21 12:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thanks.

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RedWingsDragon [2010-08-18 06:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh Yes we're all glad she did XD Awesome work here

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Panzerfire In reply to RedWingsDragon [2010-08-21 12:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks 'though I'm set to have this remaked because it could look so much better.

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ArcticAvenger20 [2010-08-18 06:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Great... another girl who has her back to me.

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Panzerfire In reply to ArcticAvenger20 [2010-08-21 12:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahhwwwww.... well you just have not been lucky enough. Keep fishing, lots of fishes out there in the sea.

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ArcticAvenger20 In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-21 13:57:24 +0000 UTC]

But I'm running out of bait.

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Panzerfire In reply to ArcticAvenger20 [2010-08-21 20:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Are you using the right bair for the right fish?

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Sergeantkeys In reply to ??? [2010-08-18 03:59:52 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to be a little bit harsh on this comment, but the shading on the legs is odd. It does not follow the legs muscles and it's shade as if it was plain. Same goes for the arms it doesn't show the proper shadows and highlights.

I know it may just be you not really caring, but it makes this picture less nice and somewhat weird. Work on you shadows, and if you need help, go take a stroll outside or look at yourself under different light sources.

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Panzerfire In reply to Sergeantkeys [2010-08-21 12:31:54 +0000 UTC]

huh ok.

Will look into it when remaking this.

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Arcemise [2010-08-18 03:42:48 +0000 UTC]

I actually think the upper torso and the knees and feet look really good. I think a big part of what's throwing it off is how straight the upper legs are (thighs, quads, etc...) Or, it might be that they're so much taller than the rest of her figure. They make up 1/2 of the height of the drawing where it might be better at, say a 1/3. Try toying with that.

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Panzerfire In reply to Arcemise [2010-08-21 12:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Actually.... before tweaking it, the legs were much shorter. But the picture looked bad. Nah I think I'll just start over from scrath drawing a new lineart of a similar pose but perhaps with a slighty different perspective.

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briantk2003 [2010-08-18 03:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, I say.

PS: If you're going to do sexy South Korean military, I recommend the following link for reference - [link] and speical forces - [link]
PS: South Korea actively recruit women into their special forces, for this example - [link]

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Panzerfire In reply to briantk2003 [2010-08-21 12:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the links. 'though for the moment I don't have plans for a south korean version. Nonetheless I shall consider it like with any other military. After remaking this one I'll be considering doing one of the Phillipine Army.

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briantk2003 In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-21 15:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I can hardly wait.

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Nyandgate In reply to ??? [2010-08-18 03:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Hell, yes!

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Panzerfire In reply to Nyandgate [2010-08-21 12:22:17 +0000 UTC]

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DocCarlson In reply to ??? [2010-08-18 01:42:02 +0000 UTC]

I would've made the other eye the winking one. Otherwise I kinda dig this. I like the mix of sex and militaria in your gallery.

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Panzerfire In reply to DocCarlson [2010-08-21 12:22:06 +0000 UTC]

And I still haven't really made the proper mix

Don't worry, a couple of upcoming projects will do that mixture just fine

Anyway this projects will get a remake. I think I can make this a lot better.

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DocCarlson In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-21 16:20:34 +0000 UTC]

No shame in re-drawing something. I do it all the time. Looking forward to it!

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Panzerfire In reply to DocCarlson [2010-08-21 20:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Allrighty.

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Steve-McTbone In reply to ??? [2010-08-18 01:10:16 +0000 UTC]

If I sign up, do I receive an Arisaka Type99? :3

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Panzerfire In reply to Steve-McTbone [2010-08-21 12:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Nope... for that you need to get a time machine and go back to the times of the Imperial Japanese Army.

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Steve-McTbone In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-21 14:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Aw, alright X)

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Paranartist In reply to ??? [2010-08-18 00:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Las mujeres en el ejrcito siempre son utiles y bienvenidas XDDDD Muy buena la pose, debo admitirlo ;3

Lol por un momento pense que se trataba de un FAL (la duda de que porque una nacion de primer mundo tiene un rifle del siglo pasado era grande ) pero luego vi lo que escribiste


--
Paranartist was here!!!


Pd: Pasa por mi cuenta, subi un fan fic con base del Battlefiled ;3

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-08-18 00:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Si se parecen un poco aunque el FAL es un fusil que dispara el 7.62x51mm NATO mientras que el Type 89 dispara municiones de 5.56x45mm NATO.

Voy a hacer de nuevo este proyecto porque creo que puedo mejorarlo. Asi si tienes algo que decir que deberia tener en cuenta (Un error del dibujo o detalle) puedes decirlo tranquilamente.

PS: Alo mejor hago tambien del "Por que me uni al Ejercito Argentino" algun dia. siempre quise dibujar al FAL en detalle.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-19 23:03:54 +0000 UTC]

OK. Trata de agregar a ejercitos no tan populares si puedes, asi nos deleitamos con algo mas EXOTICO ;3

Por cierto, no probaste en hacer dibujos en furry? Imaginate como quedarian...

Acaso no hiciste ya una foto de la chica del EA? No estaria mal una segunda version XDD

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-08-21 13:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Nah furry no es mi estilo. Aunque se supone que debo hacer un dibujo con ese tema que alguien me habia pedido hace mucho

Ah, y tengo planes para hacer un version del "Why I joined the..." del ejercito filipino. Ya veo de que otros paises exoticos hago.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-22 13:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Deberias probar luego con las del ejercito de las amazonias ;D

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-08-23 22:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhh Brazil.... La tierra de diosas. Eso si que lo voy a considerar bien

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-25 17:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Tampoco te olvides de las chinas... esas son capaces de darte con todo ;3

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-08-31 14:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh mierda ya me estas haciendo babear sobre el teclado.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-31 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Y ni hablar de las de color... creo que casi nunca muestran la belleza de las negras afroamericanas... como las mismas brasileras que bailan en comparsas *3* XDDD

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-04 13:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Cagaste ahora... me hiciste re-babear el teclado. Dame tu direcciΓ³n que te paso la cuenta del nuevo teclado que me voy a comprar.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-05 17:27:42 +0000 UTC]

y eso que no te mencione el hecho de que esten portando un fal de una mano y la glock 18 en la otra, posando desde atras y con la tipica mirada de "quieres algo de mi?"

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-07 12:13:19 +0000 UTC]



Ya veo que hago.

Ahora que hice medio como una pausa porque me acaban de pedir por una comision de arte asique le voy a estar dedicando my tiempo de dibujo exclusivamente a ese proyecto.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-08 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]

posta? y cuanto ganas por una comision?

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-08 11:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Y depende del proyecto, este que estoy a punto de hacer valdria unos 30 euros o 3000 puntos de DA y una subcripciΓ³n de tres meses.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-09 00:44:42 +0000 UTC]

OMG! cada vez ando con mas ganas de empezar con las comisiones, ahora que mejore mi furry ^^U che es cierto que podes cambiar los points por plata?

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-11 23:50:00 +0000 UTC]

No eso no se puede. Podes usar los points para comprar cosas por DeviantArt pero cambiarlos por plata me suena a imposible sino ilegal.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-12 21:10:38 +0000 UTC]

D´oh! >.< era mi oportunidad para hacerme plata ¬¬ en fin, supongo que tendre que hacer comisiones clasicas nomas ^^U

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-18 13:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Y si... Aunque podrias usar los puntos que tenes para pagar completamente o parcialmente para que alguien te haga un pedido tuyo. (Eso si... si a ese artista le interesan los puntos).

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-18 16:48:24 +0000 UTC]

XD es verdad.

Por cierto, si queres una comision o conoces a alguien que quiera una, recomendame plis ;3

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-18 19:49:00 +0000 UTC]

dale. Te aviso si me encuentro con alguien interesado en pedir comisiones relacionadas con furries o con HTF.

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-18 21:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Dalep! La verdad ando con ganas de dibujar por plata $w$

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-24 19:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Hehe quien no?

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Paranartist In reply to Panzerfire [2010-09-25 01:24:51 +0000 UTC]

los n00bs!

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Panzerfire In reply to Paranartist [2010-09-26 20:49:24 +0000 UTC]

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Sentinel182 [2010-08-18 00:34:10 +0000 UTC]

thats it, im signing up

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Panzerfire In reply to Sentinel182 [2010-08-18 00:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Good! Allmighty Japan needs more recruits. For what? huh...... well sign up and find out!

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Nyandgate In reply to Panzerfire [2010-08-18 03:00:54 +0000 UTC]

I concur, actually. We need more people.

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