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I'm a bitter ValentineColder than can be
I've never liked this holiday
It's not my cup of candied tea
I've always hated valentines
For cupids bow is sharp
As my tears waltz to the melody
Of angels melancholic harp
All I've found is sugar
In a glorified heart shaped box
And on college doors this time of year
Found only tattletale socks
Doodling hearts on paper
Isn't allowed on the 14th day
Yet I can resume my art tomorrow
When the red roses wither away
Candy grams and sugar hearts;
Something every girl hopes to receive
But they're rabbits in a bear trap
All that's left to do is grieve
I'm a bitter Valentine
Walking with a frown
But she's a queen of hearts
Begging for the crown
It's the day to have your feelings crushed
Not like there are three hundred and four more
But of course this one is special
Since plain days are a bore
Sure I'd want a teddy bear
One as tattered as perspective
Who'd want to alone the night
Of a holiday so infective
I'm a bitter Valentine
Red roses have their thorns
I'll prick my finger as surely as
Dear lovers have their scorns
All you see is couples kissing
Side by side, hand in hand
PDA makes it unbearable
To walk high schools swarming land
Even in elementary we gave each other cards
In the shadow of love with intentions naΓ―ve
We thought it was a holiday to celebrate
Not a time lie in bed and seethe
Warm feelings mixed with a liter of tears
Valentines day is Cupids lost and found
With desperation around each corner
Your "true love" will soon be crowned
As you can see I'm a bitter Valentine
Asking me is pure depravity
All I see are smiles but
Sweetness leaves a cavity
Why I don't like Valentines Day
Is not a thing to ponder
Simply take an abstract image
Of hearts conceived for squander
I don't expect to be a princess
Or graciously sit upon a throne
For Valentines Day is not so different
Just another day for being alone
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Comments: 28
paper-doesnt-judge In reply to little-wild-one [2012-02-17 05:30:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you
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Sartosis [2012-02-14 13:32:03 +0000 UTC]
I love the last two stanzas especially, this is very good.
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B1azeIchi [2012-02-08 01:44:19 +0000 UTC]
Nice job! This really does express your emotions about Valentines Day in a way unlike most others would. Instead of just saying that you hate Valentines Day, you give us plenty of reasons why you do in a rhyming fashion!
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to B1azeIchi [2012-02-08 04:22:43 +0000 UTC]
Hehe I'm very glad you liked it
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B1azeIchi In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-08 12:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Thou art welcome.
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menotmyselfori [2012-02-04 19:30:22 +0000 UTC]
Bravo!
And amazingly true.
It seemed so sweet...
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-02-05 03:45:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much(:
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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-10 23:51:48 +0000 UTC]
I was always so happy about this when I was little
Now?
Not so much
I mainly agree with you, the happiness when you're little with friends on the 14 is sooo far away from how I feel now
I just thought of it as candy
Now, you watch everyone else happy
and party
together
While you're all alone
Blah
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-02-17 05:33:20 +0000 UTC]
completely agreed, and this was the first year i had someone to spend it with and they had to leave for the week haha only with my luck would that happen
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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-03-31 22:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Awww, that sucks!
Well
Um
At least if they weren't gone, you had someone?
Grumpy mood, so sorry I'm not very cheerful right now
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-05-14 08:28:00 +0000 UTC]
Why, did something happen?
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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-05-17 22:04:22 +0000 UTC]
Nah... shark week, math test, tiredness, etc.
Nothing bad, just random little things that kept happening.
How're you?
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-05-18 02:25:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm decent haha
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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-05-29 23:56:46 +0000 UTC]
is that good or bad? :/
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-05-30 09:34:07 +0000 UTC]
It's in the middle
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ElectricNightmares [2012-02-04 19:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh I love it!
Valentines is more fun when your little, and you dont realize how pointless and commercial it is >.<
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to ElectricNightmares [2012-02-05 03:45:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you(: and i agree, it was funner when we were little
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ElectricNightmares In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-05 04:16:16 +0000 UTC]
No problem
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Aeivyen [2012-02-04 03:26:51 +0000 UTC]
:l yeah; this pretty much describes Valentines Day,
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Aeivyen [2012-02-04 03:30:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, i'm not taken by the concept of Valentines Day :l
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Aeivyen In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-04 03:32:30 +0000 UTC]
it is fairly romanticized. I like the title you used, and the way the piece flowed.
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Aeivyen [2012-02-04 03:34:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you(: I wasn't sure if it flowed well but I'm really glad it did
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Aeivyen In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-04 03:35:45 +0000 UTC]
you did a wonderful job writing it.
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