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Published: 2012-02-20 09:28:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Have you ever come to wonderWhich monsters flit about
In all disdainful minds
That eagerly burst out
With unorthodox theories
And condescending tales
Blasphemy to propaganda
And unnoticeable details
I myself have wondered
Do these beasts and I share home
Do I keep them bound with chains
Or leave them free to roam
This is not a fairy tale
In my bewildered brain
Looking at the bright side
Has always been in vain
Are these monsters friendly,
Lonely souls without a friend
Or onset schizophrenia
With voices of the bitter end
Would one like to cuddle
Become a teddy bear of sorts
Or push away affection
And delight in sarcastic retorts
These tiny, harmless beings
The monsters of the mind
Are voiced through others bodies
And don't take kindly to mankind
They're the ones who forced you
To skip breakfast, lunch, and sleep
The ones who knock air from lungs
When you gasp and weep
Pass times include injecting doubt
At mere thoughts of love
Cringing at all forms of beauty
And mocking every sightless dove
If you've ever wondered
Why you tend to hate
Or ever even fathomed
Accepting Reaper's bait
You now know who to blame
It's not just you this time
Those monsters of the mind
Commit societies crime
These quiet, trifling beings
Never remain unspoken
You're the marionette
Whose strings remain unbroken
They all enjoy to mime
Every nonconforming thought
Leaving all your plaguing woes
As displayed toys left out to rot
But not all these monsters
Are as lurid as they may seem
The kind ones stay in corners
So I guess they too are mean
Also known as demons
Monsters of the mind
Are heinous, damaging
And better left inside
But another form of self-destruction
Is leaving them uncured
Attempting to ignore them
Means keeping them secured
Since you never speak directly
They left a little note
Nothing to be scared of
Just a well-intentioned quote
"Don't worry my sweet darling
We monsters are inclined
To make the world less bearable
So don't trouble your dear mind"
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Comments: 19
menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-03-11 02:08:17 +0000 UTC]
How many times do I have to say this?
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Thank YOU for writing!
Don't thank me for reading it! Reading your writing is my pleasure! I enjoy it! Don't thank me for that!
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-03-12 01:14:38 +0000 UTC]
haha im flattered
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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-05-29 23:41:15 +0000 UTC]
You should be!
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to TrickandTreatRinLen [2012-02-24 05:28:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
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PirateScivy [2012-02-22 04:12:46 +0000 UTC]
"Are these monsters friendly
Lonely souls without a friend"
I suggest a comma after the upper line, without that pause I read the word "friend" twice without a pause. It's up to you.
"You now know who to blame
It's not just you this time
Those monsters of the mind
Are found fouler than grime"
I suggest that the fourth line be replaced with something similar to "Are the perpetrators of this crime" or "Are responsible for this crime"
"Don't worry my sweet darling
We monsters are inclined
To make the world less bearable
So don't trouble your dear mind
Awesome ending! ..... add a parenthese to end the quote!
I hope you don't mind my tinkering and editing. Catch ya' later!
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to PirateScivy [2012-02-22 06:22:01 +0000 UTC]
Haha no worries, i didn't use your exact words but i did change "Are found fouler than grime" to "commit societies crime"
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PirateScivy In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-22 07:26:55 +0000 UTC]
Nice, looking good!
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Lillian13 [2012-02-20 18:42:26 +0000 UTC]
hmm, if this was a sickness... then yes I definetly got that . I do not ignore it... I welcome it with open arms
truely amazing poem btw, so you have thoughts like this too sometimes?
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Lillian13 [2012-02-22 06:18:53 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you and i get these thought more often than "sometimes"
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Lillian13 In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-22 23:32:13 +0000 UTC]
Ever stopped breathing when you would daydream?
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Lillian13 In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-02-24 21:49:03 +0000 UTC]
yay... your just like me!
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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to MySilentWhispers [2012-02-22 06:18:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you <3
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