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paper-doesnt-judge — The Bird
Published: 2012-06-18 05:49:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description I admire the feathers crimson red
I hear the melody of words unsaid
Suicide off the oak tree branch that broke
The winds catch and caress like smoke
My arms ache begging to capture the wind
Craving for feathers my arms feel skinned
I treasure the bird so free flying high
"You can not join me." It trills flying by
Mocking birds words leave a tear in my eye
I run for the bird, end up in the sky
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Comments: 8

menotmyselfori [2012-10-30 21:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to menotmyselfori [2012-11-15 04:15:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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menotmyselfori In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-12-02 22:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Noo, thank you for all of your beautiful writing

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Shadowcaster97 [2012-06-19 18:46:58 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant, it flows well and has a sort of teasing darkness that is intertwined well with the nature of the bird you portray in this poem. Well done!

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Shadowcaster97 [2012-06-21 07:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading, i love your comment<3

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Shadowcaster97 In reply to paper-doesnt-judge [2012-06-24 12:54:46 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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CelestialMemories [2012-06-19 06:07:25 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic...the rhyme flows so perfectly...and I just love the content. Fantastic job!

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to CelestialMemories [2012-06-21 07:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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