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Published: 2009-01-17 20:38:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 582; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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I'm trying to get more active in the dA community. Michael Crichlow [link] is doing this drawing contest thingy and so here's my entry.Comments and critiques are very welcome!
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reference photo is [link]
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thanks! especially coming from you! love your work.
cheers.
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I like what you've got here, though I do agree with the previous comment. Exercises like this, though, are great practice and the pose in the ref photo is a bit tricky. I think one of the two big problems I see here is that her arms and hands are smaller/thinner than they should be. The other problem her mid torso - her head/shoulders/breasts look good and her hips/legs look good but the middle torso sort of splits her body into separate pieces. Still, I like your character design style - hope you submit for the next two challenges! =^-^=
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thank you for your helpful words! =0]
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you got the pose nicely,but if i may say you need to work on the proportions i little more,much like myself ^_^
nicely done.
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proportions are my biggest plague! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!
thank you for your feedback!
cheers.
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Don't worry. Proportions are anyone's nightmare.
You did well with the general pose. The only thing is that she is a bit too skinny.
Keep it up! You're on the good way!
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thank you for your helpful words and encouragement! =0]
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