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Published: 2007-05-19 22:03:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description I am thrown
In the shores of sea
Wish to flow wid'em
But can't resist
The drastic waves
Shatter me to pieces
Yet their lives
My heart within
Bright but cold
Filled with desires
Hopes with love
Only for thee
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Comments: 8

tursiops33 [2007-11-21 19:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice one. Pretty gloomy though...
The las sentence I think should be only for thee
you forgot the o of the for ^^

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parrie In reply to tursiops33 [2007-11-21 19:25:18 +0000 UTC]

its betta now?

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tursiops33 In reply to parrie [2007-11-21 19:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Much better ^^

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parrie In reply to tursiops33 [2007-11-23 18:44:07 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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azulan [2007-05-20 17:53:02 +0000 UTC]

good stuff

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parrie In reply to azulan [2007-05-22 19:27:40 +0000 UTC]

ahh thnx matee!!!
i really need back-ups!!!!

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azulan In reply to parrie [2007-05-23 03:09:10 +0000 UTC]

tee hee...no probs...

i think if you're active enough on dA, you'll have all teh back-up you'll need...no kidding

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parrie In reply to azulan [2007-06-01 17:05:53 +0000 UTC]

geez i luv tht

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