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Published: 2008-02-27 21:26:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description the night before i met you
i breathed a tune;
not quite for dancers or lovers
or lazy sunday afternoons

but more for that in which i knew
i had inside my brick throat flue;
i lacked the strength to sing it then,
as i most often used to do.
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Comments: 6

Error732 [2008-02-29 22:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Brief, but it bears repeated study. I keep re-reading it; it feels almost recursive.

I like it: elaborate simplicty.

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patterninverted In reply to Error732 [2008-03-01 21:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Aw, well thank you

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Error732 In reply to patterninverted [2008-03-02 00:05:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Error732 In reply to Error732 [2008-02-29 22:51:02 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* . . . "simplicity."

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patterninverted In reply to Error732 [2008-03-01 22:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, it's quite fine. I find myself spelling words wrong always.

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Error732 In reply to patterninverted [2008-03-02 00:05:42 +0000 UTC]

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