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Published: 2008-02-27 21:26:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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the night before i met youi breathed a tune;
not quite for dancers or lovers
or lazy sunday afternoons
but more for that in which i knew
i had inside my brick throat flue;
i lacked the strength to sing it then,
as i most often used to do.
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Comments: 6
Error732 [2008-02-29 22:50:46 +0000 UTC]
Brief, but it bears repeated study. I keep re-reading it; it feels almost recursive.
I like it: elaborate simplicty.
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patterninverted In reply to Error732 [2008-03-01 22:00:11 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, it's quite fine. I find myself spelling words wrong always.
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