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Pechan — Crying Shame - Page 1
Published: 2006-02-23 07:48:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 929; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 243
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page one, fully inked.so, if you ahven't been keepign up with my scraps, theres what i've been doing.
this is officially my first fully sketched, penciled, inked seq. art. and i'm not that quick about it as i am with a regular picture. XD i'm more cut out for cover art. -_-;;
so i was supposed to make a hook opening. soemthign tat ends in a cliffahanger in the first page, so the raders will be intersted to see what's next from the first read. and that's all i coudl come up with.
so far, all teh comment i get about it are her jacket. XD everyone seemed to love her 'zipper' sleeves. not liek i'm the first one to come up with it though, there's plenty of cargo pants that have the leggings zip off and so i guess there are sweaters like that.
uhhh, i dunno if i'm gonna use that text. i MIGHT try my hand at lettering... that or get someoen else from class to letter for me. n_n;; that'd be a huge help.
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coolness! yeah the sweater is really awesome. I got kind of confused in the shot from the back with the chair back and stuff, but maybe im just dumb.
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good job, it looks great i cant wait for the rest of it.
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It's the question that plagues all of us at some point. I mean, how many of us can honestly say that they haven't wondered at some point or other who was responsible for their death? I know I have.
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i'd wonder too. i'd lvoe to come back as a ghost and find out. hey, i might even congradulate the murderer.
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If it were me, I would probably follow mine around for years and years, chanting creepy things in his/her ears at night, throwing away the furniture during work hours, ruining dates, and shrink-wrapping the bathroom. Y'know, subtle things ^_^
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-P.A.
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lol, any coloring is always gonna be grealty appeciated. n_n
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-P.A.
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Looking good, so far...it looks like it's going to be a very interesting story
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awesome. dynamicism is good, not sure about the guys response... i like it.
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what about is response is off?
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bottom left hand panel, he just seems to slowly accept it without humour, sarcasm, or doubt...as if the 'kid' has that much cash. i just think he a bit...gulible?
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YES!!!
THAT has been what i've been talking about
"and i'm not that quick about it as i am with a regular picture"
shut up, thats why allyou pics are so crappy, because you dont take your time and FINISH them.
this is great.
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well, thank you very much. it's so great to hear positive feedback from you.
you'll have to thank my teacher/editor. he kept sending me back to work on it more. n_n;;; so much time for one lousy page! but when i showed it to the class everyone was damn cool with what i was doing. feels great.
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first of all, i doubt that took more time than an hour. maybe hour and a half. TOPS, and i mean TOPS.
you shouldnt have to force yourself into putting more time, just relax and say toyourself "this will look so cool if i just put some more time in there."
so just keep relaxed and have patience with your stuff, a better result and audience will appear with it.
-Bret
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