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Published: 2018-01-23 16:15:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1203; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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I made this piece for a contest, so i decided to take two of my favorite ships in two of my favorite shows and put them together with a picnic.Related content
Comments: 8
LacuLigaminae [2018-01-23 16:32:13 +0000 UTC]
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The view on this is impressive, all the anatomy seems great, the hands on (I think) Peridot look a bit unnatural. The colouring is nice but it doesn't seem as flat as it could be (you can see quite a few white parts). other than that the shading falls nicely! The girl on the bottom left, her top/jacket seems a bit too close to the skin colour, if that's her design consider that not there. The hair on all of the seems okay but again the girl on the bottom left, her hair seems to crazy and spiky. Furthermore, the shading on the right of her jacked seems to dark and looks strange.
I really hope this helps!
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Peerlessgrimm In reply to LacuLigaminae [2018-01-23 16:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! I always appreciate the help.
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LacuLigaminae In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2018-01-23 16:48:18 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! And thank you for the llama.
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SlackEye [2018-01-23 16:39:08 +0000 UTC]
I would never have considered colliding these fandoms. Maybe that's why I'm a writer, not a draw-er.
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Peerlessgrimm In reply to SlackEye [2018-01-23 16:42:55 +0000 UTC]
to be honest neither would I. But there wasnt a limit on the contest so i went with the two ships i have that i place above others in terms of favorites
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