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Published: 2017-03-31 16:53:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 547; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description This is opal from steven universe. I am aware that the colors arnt all right but this is what i can do with what i have
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PretzelCupid [2017-03-31 22:52:16 +0000 UTC]

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Hi! Sorry if this will sound confusing in some parts! (This is my first critique so yeah!)

So, first of all, the colours! I think that it's good that you are working with what you are given, tough you should note that you should colour in only one direction, for example just moving your pencil upwards when colouring certain areas, this will give the drawing, or at least the colouring a cleaner look. You have to make sure to fill in those blank spots, too! (If you leave em' there they can pose as an annoyance to the viewer.) You should also use this trick in which you draw a light source (Example: A sun) In a corner of the drawing and shade the parts that make sense according to that light source, it actually helps a lot while shading the drawing!

As far as the anatomy goes, it's quite good actually. Tough I would suggest referencing off of a normal human body (If you are going for a more realistic-cartoon style)

Now, the line-work. So, let's start with the sketching part first before we get into the fancy lines. You should hold the pencil at a comfortable grip and make sure to press lightly for the best results, if you press too hard, the pencil marks will show if you erase them and if you are not comfortable while holding the pencil, the drawing/sketch itself could come out quiet sloppy. And now for the line-work, you should of course also have a comfortable grip and slowly make your way along the picture you just sketched, I suggest using a felt pen or even just a simple black pen (Black pens are the most common line-work tools but use whatever colours work best for you!)

Anyways, a few extra tips would be to add a background to the drawing itself cause it can really spice the whole thing up a notch! Tough this is completely optional! And the other tip is to note the creases/wrinkles in the clothing, they add a nice touch to the drawing itself(from personal experience)

Alrighty! This is all I really have to say about the drawing really, it is quite good but obviously there could be a few improvements! I really hope this helped you a bit at least and yeah, I hope to see more art from you very soon dear! See ya!

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to PretzelCupid [2017-03-31 22:59:10 +0000 UTC]

First off I would like to thank you for both the watch and the critique! It's not very often someone actually does it for me and its always appreciated! Also thank your the tips in the coloring especially because i feel like that is my toughest thing right now and i will definitely be using these in the near future! 

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PretzelCupid In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 23:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah! You're very welcome dear! I'm so glad I could help a fellow artist!

Also, I know the pain of colouring, it takes a buncha practice but you'll get there, I know so! ;3
But yeah, I'm also very glad that you'll be using those tips, It's nice to hear that! <3<3

See ya and keep being awesome!~
 

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to PretzelCupid [2017-03-31 23:49:18 +0000 UTC]

same to you

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NathanielRhodes [2017-05-23 04:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Delish!

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to NathanielRhodes [2017-05-23 04:14:42 +0000 UTC]

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Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:03:06 +0000 UTC]

So good!!

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:11:23 +0000 UTC]

You really think so? Thanks!

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:11:51 +0000 UTC]

I do!! Np!!

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:12:10 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:14:46 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:15:36 +0000 UTC]

= ( ^_^ ) =

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:16:12 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:16:27 +0000 UTC]

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:16:45 +0000 UTC]

So how ya doing ?

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:17:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm doing alright. How about you?

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Good ! Just bored

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Peerlessgrimm In reply to Fnaflover455 [2017-03-31 17:18:35 +0000 UTC]

well i got to go get some cleaning done

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Fnaflover455 In reply to Peerlessgrimm [2017-03-31 17:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Kk

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