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peterdawes — A Vampire's Tango by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-11-05 14:49:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 825; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 10
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Description calls the night to all its servants
devils slip out through the shade
unbridled wickedness unleashed
to curse the mortal world with death

starlight shines on dark proceedings
moon and shadow set the stage
kiss me now and taunt me later
funeral pyres await till day

come with me, immortal brethren
come with eager hearts enslaved.

fiddlers fiddle through the chorus
play us now the vampire's tango.

sanguinary passions play out
through the steps our bodies take
wicked dance, come steal the moonlight
wicked demons, rise and play

step with me, in bloodlust raptured
step with me, inflamed, insane.

fiddlers fiddle through the chorus
play us now the vampire's tango.

i reach for you, your pulse a siren
a call that beckons me to thirst
i kiss the skin that razors pierce
and drink the life contained therein.

quietly, you slip to slumber
quietly, your candle's flame
consumed by darkness, wick an ember
surrenders one, another's gain.

the garish sun begins to rise
immortal twilight fades to day.

fiddlers rest their tired fiddles
until the next immortal tango.
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Comments: 26

SomethingOnceSacred [2010-01-04 21:08:29 +0000 UTC]

this is utterly inspiring! I love it. I can hear the music played to this...

I can't tell you how many times I've felt a need, and couldn't do anything about it...

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Deadly-X-Nightshade [2009-05-26 06:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Very well written!

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kiwi-damnation [2008-11-10 07:36:22 +0000 UTC]

WHOA That amazed me. I loved it, it sounds fantastic said out loud. The pace its so quickened so very much like a tango

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vivalamonica [2008-11-09 14:16:10 +0000 UTC]

featured => [link]

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-11-08 09:58:02 +0000 UTC]

I really liked the last three stanzas.

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Kyoonyx [2008-11-08 04:35:45 +0000 UTC]

I was really enthralled by this poem. The way the words were placed and put into perspective. It made me smile.

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xEmo-Loserx [2008-11-07 20:34:54 +0000 UTC]

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ImmortalityOfEmoPoet [2008-11-07 17:10:05 +0000 UTC]

that's just brilliant! the whole idea is just refreshing! keep writing

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peterdawes In reply to ImmortalityOfEmoPoet [2008-11-07 17:28:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you! i am glad you enjoyed it... and will be certain to keep writing.

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Snow-Machine [2008-11-07 14:15:54 +0000 UTC]

I can almost hear the music set to this. It's dark and frenetic and I can feel around its heartbeat, its angry pulse.

I cannot tell you how many times I feel like disappearing from this world of light and becoming a servant of monsters, a thing of the darkness.

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torrid-avenger [2008-11-06 19:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I loved it, you really painted a picture in my mind with your words.

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peterdawes In reply to torrid-avenger [2008-11-06 19:50:48 +0000 UTC]

that is a high compliment to me. thank you very kindly.

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ErilisVampyre [2008-11-06 14:35:57 +0000 UTC]

*smile* Quite the melodious and dancing piece.

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peterdawes In reply to ErilisVampyre [2008-11-06 19:50:07 +0000 UTC]

why, thank you!

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ErilisVampyre In reply to peterdawes [2008-11-14 16:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Sure.

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jaswannabeme [2008-11-06 05:00:46 +0000 UTC]

totally imaginative

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believeeverything [2008-11-06 03:29:41 +0000 UTC]

i really like this, brings out the passion of the hunt, in a way it makes it seem sensual

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peterdawes In reply to believeeverything [2008-11-06 03:33:58 +0000 UTC]

fantastic! thank you very kindly, dear.

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Malandante [2008-11-06 01:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I love this. It called to my very dark sinister side. Magnificently done.

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peterdawes In reply to Malandante [2008-11-06 03:33:41 +0000 UTC]

ahh, and i love to call to the dark side in all of us.
thank you very kindly, dear.

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Malandante In reply to peterdawes [2008-11-06 03:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Well you have most definitely succeeded in my case.
Always a pleasure. Your pieces are a joy to read.

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paintedbluerose [2008-11-05 19:04:23 +0000 UTC]

I like the tango part of it. I can see two vampires dancing around-I don't know if that was your intent... But it would be a sensual bloody dance.

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peterdawes In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-11-06 03:33:12 +0000 UTC]

quite so, actually. i am glad you enjoyed it.

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VagabondMolloy [2008-11-05 17:17:37 +0000 UTC]

You should do it more often *Grins* I really like this.

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peterdawes In reply to VagabondMolloy [2008-11-06 03:32:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you very kindly, daniel. i am not certain how this crept into my subconscious, but i shall attempt to keep that door ajar from now on.

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VagabondMolloy In reply to peterdawes [2008-11-07 01:51:54 +0000 UTC]

*Hands you a doorstop*

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