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Published: 2009-01-25 16:56:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 617; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 7
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an x-ray into the psyche,a portal into the realm of existential awareness
oh come alive, poet. wake from your slumber.
open your eyes and rise above the light.
i write because my silent heart needs to have a pulse.
there is life in the old man;
there is life in the young soul.
i write because without the notion of pouring
words like a fountain onto fertile ground,
there is no life; there is no meaning any longer.
i am nothing more than the dog-eared pages of an
albert camus novel without the heartbeat of a poem.
i am nothing more than the empty bottle of scotch
lying on the floor, spinning around to find the
person who might offer these cold lips a tender embrace.
i need the spell of music; the symphony of words,
pricking my skin and allowing the deluge of my soul
to pour outward, like a river running out from a chasm.
my mind cannot find stillness in the chaos
without the sweet taste of emotion and sentiment on my tongue,
a visceral temptation. i crave the decadence,
yet search for the salvation which comes
when pen and paper intertwine like two lovers
achieving perfect consonance deep within the night.
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Comments: 29
Flames-on-a-Page [2009-11-26 07:31:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, its great... I think that that is all that needs to be said. Who'd have thought that a pen scribbling ink onto a blank page could produce something as terrific as that. Well done
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Swords-and-Bandages [2009-01-28 05:40:32 +0000 UTC]
The words of every poet who desires just one line to come in that unending tropor of the soul's silence.
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peterdawes In reply to Swords-and-Bandages [2009-01-29 18:59:56 +0000 UTC]
indeed and amen.
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kiwi-damnation [2009-01-27 05:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow truly spectacular piece. Beautiful and moving. Just how I feel too...
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peterdawes In reply to kiwi-damnation [2009-01-27 06:28:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you! one of the few i was actually pleased with. *chuckles*
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Kathryn-777 [2009-01-27 05:19:53 +0000 UTC]
i am nothing more than the empty bottle of scotch
lying on the floor, spinning around to find the
person who might offer these cold lips a tender embrace.
I really liked that part. Though you didn't meet the requirements it holds itself very well and conveyed a vivid image. Thanks for choosing to submit it anyway.
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peterdawes In reply to Kathryn-777 [2009-01-29 19:01:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you for reading it!
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GetYourGrip [2009-01-26 06:59:23 +0000 UTC]
excellent work, beautiful imagery, and great point.
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DragonsChest [2009-01-26 06:21:42 +0000 UTC]
'the person that might offer these cold lips a tender embrace.' I love that Peter...
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Ferelwing [2009-01-26 01:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Bah you got busy. Some of us barely finished by the skin of our teeth
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Ferelwing In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-29 19:10:54 +0000 UTC]
(I cheated, I did a few of them in a row.)
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peterdawes In reply to Ferelwing [2009-01-29 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]
*chuckles* this is what i should have done. hindsight being 20-20, right?
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Ferelwing In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-29 19:20:30 +0000 UTC]
Agreed! If I was in the mood for poetry, I'd write ahead and then keep them there or post them all at once to stay ahead. Then when I got behind I'd wait till the mood was right and write them all up to that point. I think only managed to do them one day at a time *grin*.
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PhantomThiefVier [2009-01-25 18:22:19 +0000 UTC]
failure to the challenge, sure, but out of that context, most definately not.
"i write because without the notion of pouring
words like a fountain onto fertile ground,
there is no life; there is no meaning any longer."
those words are very true. i doubt any writer could stop for that reason alone.
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peterdawes In reply to PhantomThiefVier [2009-01-29 19:07:58 +0000 UTC]
i thought, if nothing else, my fellow wordsmiths could commiserate.
thank you!
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Pieces-Of-My-Heart [2009-01-25 18:08:24 +0000 UTC]
Definitely not a failure... it inspired you to write an awesome piece!
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peterdawes In reply to Pieces-Of-My-Heart [2009-01-29 19:10:02 +0000 UTC]
i am glad it turned out alright regardless.
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sandmanno3 [2009-01-25 18:02:40 +0000 UTC]
hahah, screw requirements.
I bow to your brilliance.
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peterdawes In reply to sandmanno3 [2009-01-29 19:09:27 +0000 UTC]
*chuckles* screw requirements, indeed. thank you!
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