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peterdawes — Haiku Homage to Philadelphia by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-04-11 17:45:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description 1. an outdoor symphony

car cacophony
horn chorale and motorists
traffic on broad street


2. truth in advertising

always sunny in
philadelphia; meanwhile,
raindrops hit the ground


3. strolling through jfk plaza

ears perk at joggers
dog and owner play string games
tangled in a leash


4. a free gallery exhibit

an outdoor mural
masterpiece upon cement
welcomed graffiti


5. lost in a crowd

parade of faces
resemble winter snowflakes
no two are the same


6. and so, in closing. . .

immortal stranger
urban hymns flow forth from ink
smile of a poet
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Comments: 23

katarthis [2008-09-15 23:07:40 +0000 UTC]

4 too is my fav.

k

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denlm [2008-04-14 14:26:08 +0000 UTC]

#2 and #4 are my faves. Keep up the good work.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-15 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my dear.

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Penfury [2008-04-13 02:13:14 +0000 UTC]

I love #2 and #6. The others are good, just not my flavor.

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peterdawes In reply to Penfury [2008-04-14 02:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Those were my favorites as well, I must say. I favor the jfk plaza one, too, but the experience might be best labeled 'you would have had to be there.'

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Penfury In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-14 03:08:17 +0000 UTC]

I would imagine that is true. Most places have their own flavor.

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peterdawes In reply to Penfury [2008-04-15 02:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Quite so. I believe Philadelphia's flavor would be something in the cheese steak variety.

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Penfury In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-15 03:06:30 +0000 UTC]

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LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-12 02:39:37 +0000 UTC]

You make us see it!

Bravo!

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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-12 20:04:07 +0000 UTC]

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dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-12 02:00:42 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhhhhh i love this style !!! those snapshots are aWESOMe !!!!!

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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-12 20:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Jazz

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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-13 02:22:59 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome dear peter ^^

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YouInventedMe [2008-04-11 20:28:07 +0000 UTC]

always love these

xo!

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peterdawes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-04-12 01:03:15 +0000 UTC]

They are challenging, but I've grown fond of them.

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Sacrificed-Sanity [2008-04-11 19:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Have to say... "Truth in Advertising" about sums up Philly in a handful of words.

Well written.

It's a shame I moved before the writer came to visit. I'd have really loved to spend time together :/

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peterdawes In reply to Sacrificed-Sanity [2008-04-12 01:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, but the writer says this gives her the excuse to venture to Seattle. Perhaps she will deem fit to return something to me in the process.

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Sacrificed-Sanity In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-12 13:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Both of you are more than welcome to come out... it's a lovely city out here... but very, very addicting. I've yet to miss home.

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peterdawes In reply to Sacrificed-Sanity [2008-04-12 19:53:37 +0000 UTC]

The writer fancies Seattle quite a bit. Has been wishing an excuse to venture there.
I. . . am persona non grata there. My former employers are vexed with me a bit.

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Sacrificed-Sanity In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-15 16:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes... I remember that now.

Well, inform the Writer that if she wishes to come I would be more than happy to take a few days to show her what I've seen. If she feels like taking a trip Ninja's soon to be step-mother makes the world's best Thai food about an hour from here. And usually it's free.

She's the best Thai-Mom ever.

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HoldingBackTears [2008-04-11 17:50:57 +0000 UTC]

the sixth one is my favorite.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-04-11 18:14:47 +0000 UTC]

I only thought it fitting.
Thank you.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-11 19:07:18 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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