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peterdawes — On Falling Behind by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-12-17 18:55:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 3
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Description there once was a poet named peter
who thought not a thing could impede him
a challenge he craved
but life misbehaved
and now, there's a skip in his meter.
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Comments: 31

Malandante [2009-01-19 09:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh how I know what you mean.

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peterdawes In reply to Malandante [2009-01-19 18:13:12 +0000 UTC]

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Malandante In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-20 00:28:29 +0000 UTC]

I second that motion.

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writer-muse [2009-01-05 07:14:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm way worse than you! I've neglected posting, writing, reading and commenting on others etc. I must be punished. Oh, and in terms of what you actually wrote - HEE!

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TheRedHunter [2008-12-23 10:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Peter's... meter? Oh what delicious images I could conjure... But I suppose I should leave that to your lovely lady.

I hope your holidays are coming along, I apologize for taking so long to slog through all your poetry (not that I'm telling you to let up ) I'll get to it all eventually.

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-12-21 01:13:50 +0000 UTC]

*snickers*
know just how ya feel man,lol.

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DragonsChest [2008-12-19 07:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Well done Peter

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peterdawes In reply to DragonsChest [2008-12-19 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]

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Teague-Drydan [2008-12-19 05:21:08 +0000 UTC]

nice little limerick!
Luck with the ode. I had to write one once...maybe I'll attempt to dig it out & post it?

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peterdawes In reply to Teague-Drydan [2008-12-19 20:56:03 +0000 UTC]

i would love to read it if you do.

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Teague-Drydan In reply to peterdawes [2008-12-19 22:43:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that in mind. I can't find a digital copy of it right now...which means I'll have to see about digging it up after I get back from Christmas. ^^ I give you the right to pester me about it you wish

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AsteriaSinclair [2008-12-19 02:02:49 +0000 UTC]

I can relate...

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peterdawes In reply to AsteriaSinclair [2008-12-19 02:58:00 +0000 UTC]

gets the best of us.

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kiwi-damnation [2008-12-18 07:19:14 +0000 UTC]

LMAO Nice work! Love it!

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peterdawes In reply to kiwi-damnation [2008-12-19 03:16:48 +0000 UTC]

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ikkuma [2008-12-17 22:45:05 +0000 UTC]

i rofled.
you're too funny, peter.

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peterdawes In reply to ikkuma [2008-12-19 03:19:24 +0000 UTC]

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Zer0Hawke [2008-12-17 19:44:20 +0000 UTC]

That made me smile - and I really needed to ^_^ Limericks are great. And I know how you feel... fortunately, I think I might be able to wind-down for a couple of weeks now.

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-12-19 03:19:47 +0000 UTC]

oh good. relax and enjoy life, love. it passes you by far too quickly.

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Zer0Hawke In reply to peterdawes [2008-12-19 14:32:56 +0000 UTC]

It sure does... I still can't believe I'm old enough to be at University. Eighteen years has gone a little too quickly.

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PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-17 19:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Too much work on your plate? Reminds me of when I had science fair last year. XP

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peterdawes In reply to PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-19 03:19:57 +0000 UTC]

just a few things.

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PhantomThiefVier In reply to peterdawes [2008-12-19 03:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Try not to get TOO far behind!

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peterdawes In reply to PhantomThiefVier [2008-12-19 03:45:54 +0000 UTC]

i am so far behind, i am about to lap myself.

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PhantomThiefVier In reply to peterdawes [2008-12-19 03:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear, better remember to pace yourself well as you hurry along!

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Renegade-Angel23 [2008-12-17 19:27:31 +0000 UTC]

hehe, I know that feeling!

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peterdawes In reply to Renegade-Angel23 [2008-12-19 03:20:02 +0000 UTC]

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Ferelwing [2008-12-17 19:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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peterdawes In reply to Ferelwing [2008-12-19 03:20:09 +0000 UTC]

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TyC113 [2008-12-17 19:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the ode was really difficult for me. It took a long time for me to do mine.

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peterdawes In reply to TyC113 [2008-12-19 03:20:23 +0000 UTC]

yes, i am still a bit daunted. but i must try.

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