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peterdawes — Over My Head
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Published: 2008-11-17 17:56:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 584; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 10
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breathing underwater,i drown beneath the weight of
thoughts too deep to tread
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sad, but true, that i think many of us can relate.
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I don't care how many syllables it's got,
it's absolutely perfect.
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I realized that a poem does not need to be long..
it can be this simpel and yet so meaningful!
*milord you has not yet answered my note that I sent you long time ago..*
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oh heavens, my apologies. so many notes flying in and out of my message center these days that yours must have gotten lost in the shuffle.
i shall see to it now.
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You know...drowning has always held an odd fascination with me. If I had to choose a way to go, horrific as I've been told it can be...it might top the bill.
aside from that rather macarbe thought though, nice piece, and I'm sure we can forgive the extra syllable. this time.
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i would not have enjoyed the few seconds of panic before my lungs flooded and my heart ceased beating. am not sure how i would have liked to die, though. each method has an irrevocable downside, this being that whole death thing.
thank you for your mercy, sir.
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to each their own, I suppose...hehe
how are you, by the by? I've not been keeping tabs on people as I usually do...
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Sounds like a good idea. I've felt a little like that recently - fortunately, I've had uni work to distract me from it and give my subconscious time to mull it over.
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i am supposed to be working on my novel. *chuckles* have fallen behind, but the poetic muse has tied up its prose counterpart and locked it in a closet today, it would seem.
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