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Description smoke rings in the dark
shadows dance across the wall
strange how they resemble two lovers
intertwined with one another
within the melodious spell
of candlelight and wine
of complete inhibition
a tango perhaps
or maybe a waltz
playing out before my solemn eyes
as though affording me a show

upon the canvas of white
the shadows lean in for a kiss
their mouths become connected
while their souls unite as one
lips caressing lips
conveying unspoken messages
of love and passion
desire and longing
as though they possess no voice
with which to say it aloud

i watch as though a voyeur
a jealous man with a fickle heart
a wayward paramour
left to admire another's bliss
through the back and forth exchange
of kisses mixed with dance steps
touches that explore the face
the neck, the shoulders
the hips, the chest
while two bodies take hold of each other
not wishing or willing to let go

until the shadows drift
the light changes; the seasons change
the dancers become embroiled within
the tides of fate, the riddle of
the shifting passage of time
some shadows remain, but the lovers
dissipate as the smoke
from my cigarette
fading from my jealous gaze
becoming memories upon my mind

leaving me sitting there
just as alone as i'd been before
left to watch dying embers
of days and years without the sight
of those two lovers
and their brazen, foolish dance
their deep affection
and their passion.
caught within the slow passage of time
longing to recapture the dances
i once shared with you.
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Comments: 39

katarthis [2008-09-09 02:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Pretty again.

k

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denlm [2008-03-30 13:13:20 +0000 UTC]

More pining, Peter? Lord, Robin, give him a shake will you. All this moping will kill him -- and us too! Action. This is a man who thrived on it once. Is it too late to get him off his dejected arse and into gear? I swear, I can see Lestat rolling his eyes.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-03-30 13:21:09 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* Merely honing the poetic skills, Denise. Have I vexed you this terribly?
Granted the sentiment is true. I do still pine for her as any would for an estranged lover. However, I was far too occupied last evening to spend much time moping.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-03-30 13:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Vex? Too light a word. Oh, never mind. You know how to charm your fans out of their funk -- so I will take back my order to Robin. But know, vampire, I am resorting to old Anne Rice novels while I await yours -- and it ain't a pretty sight!

Okay, you tempted and I'll bite: What happened last evening?

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-03-31 00:06:37 +0000 UTC]

My nights are actually quite occupied. Being a coven's second is a full time position. At least, when one actually assists an active and conscientious master. Sabrina left the lot of them to do whatever they pleased, whereas Robin concerns himself with their day to day affairs.
My job duties include counseling, preventing the lot of them from strangling each other, and charming the other coven heads when Robin needs a favor. Amongst other things.

Beyond that, I was doing a bit of research last evening. Is it possible for an immortal to go blind from reading through too many website pages? I do believe I came close.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-03-31 11:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like the same duties as a "Second to Consult"... You wouldn't know about that since you've not read Fellowship. It's a similar post Scott Cairl will create and offer to Dina... if he can ever find her. I like the "chamring" part of your duties. That's something I suspect you are very good at, when you are not "persuading" people with more commanding means.

BTW, what were you researching? Something productive in your search for your lady fair I hope.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-01 15:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Robin says that The Fates gifted me with charm in abundance to compensate for my rank moodiness. The challenge comes in being the gentleman without being construed as acting flirtatious with the women. Was not so much of a problem when I possessed fewer inhibitions. The past few years, however, I have been attempting to be a better husband, regardless of my estrangement from my wife.

Persuasion. . . is another talent. You would be surprised how far a mere wicked glint of the eye will go in getting what you want.

However, on the matters of research. . . yes, for the lady. A few ideas in mind. Attempting to ensure the kiss I blow upon the wind finds its target in some manner.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-01 18:10:30 +0000 UTC]

attempting to be a better husband Attempting? Better? Does that mean not always succeeding? Ah, now I see it... that glint you talked about. Yep, I'm sure it gets you very far indeed.

BTW, I suspect that kiss has found its mark already. You've certainly sent it on its way often enough.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-01 20:26:42 +0000 UTC]

What I meant: For several years, I did a lot to numb the pain. The wedding band tucked away. The photograph stored elsewhere. Had multiple affairs with multiple women. Always searching for that face that wanted to be her, but wasn't quite. Upon returning to Philadelphia, I had a change of heart.
I never did finish that short story, did I? Perhaps when the editorial work is through.
Whatever the matter, I failed her those years. Upon waking, the wedding ring found its way back and the illicit affairs ceased at once. However, I never did quite act upon seeing her again. ('One day, we'll be together again,' et. cetera.)

Have been sorely tempted several times in the interim. Seduced a few times as well. Hence "attempting". Have not succumbed, but have come close. The Japanese character upon my arm helps with that regard. Everyone always wants to know what it says.
Recalling its meaning has an effect akin to a splash of water upon the face.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-02 00:43:36 +0000 UTC]

I assume you will not share its meaning... Dare I guess it is something like "forever"?

Yes, I do await the ending of that story... among so many others. But who am I to gripe? I have my own novel to edit and get to a printer. My excuse is a blue-eyed devil with a tattoo of his own.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-02 03:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Fidelity.
I thought that said it all. On the left arm, to be a companion to the ring upon the left hand.

I have been attempting tunnel vision to finish editing. Only the occasional dalliance with prose. That story will be completed, though; it is a very important story to me. I have another item I keep within a desk drawer whenever I need a reminder about fidelity.
Her fidelity.
But I am attempting to behave and finish the work set out before me.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-02 18:46:40 +0000 UTC]

I had the correct first letter anyway. I like Fidelity better than Forever though, especially in light of your immortality and hers. Now you have me intrigued about the item in your desk drawer. What a tease you are.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-03 11:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I have precious few items from them. The photograph, the ring.
A pendant on a black cord since its original chain broke.
The item in my desk is especially important. Her message in a bottle, I suppose you could say.

Making progress.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-06 22:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Stop teasing, Peter! Please? What is in the desk? You're making me crazy.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-07 16:34:39 +0000 UTC]

If you'd come over, I'd show you.
Alright, enough teasing. A very old letter. A message in a bottle, so to speak.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-07 16:42:53 +0000 UTC]

If I could get to Philly, I would! Is this letter talked about in a novel I have yet to read? If so, I'll wait patiently for more details. If not, I am going to be all over you like black on midnight, buddy.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 00:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. . . not a novel. But a story, yes.
Are you all over me? I will tell if requested, only wished to give you that choice.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 00:41:01 +0000 UTC]

I'll settle for knowing which story and help in finding it online, if it's here.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 10:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Not yet. The co-conspirator and I have delayed finishing that particular tale in order to focus on edits. But it shall be finished.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 11:24:23 +0000 UTC]

:sulks a bit:

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 20:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, I did promise I'd behave and finish this book. . .

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-10 00:10:46 +0000 UTC]

erks up but doubts he can follow through: Umm. Okay. :smiles hopefully:

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-11 14:17:19 +0000 UTC]

You doubt me? I am crushed.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-11 17:06:28 +0000 UTC]

YOU doubt you. I'm trying to keep an open mind.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-11 17:17:14 +0000 UTC]

*raises an eyebrow*
Well. . . so long as you haven't counted me out.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-11 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Never. I do trust your instincts on this. I simply don't have patience enough to wait for them to signal, "Time!"

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-11 19:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Rest assured, my patience is waning as well.
Time truly is a bastard, isn't it?

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-11 20:27:53 +0000 UTC]

A bastard that runs at a sprint or drags his feet as he sees fit. In fact, "bastard" may not be sufficient.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-12 19:16:03 +0000 UTC]

A tool of the devil, then?

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-13 02:13:13 +0000 UTC]

If God is eternal life, the devil would be the one who plays with the clock to try to disprupt His plans.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-14 02:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Quite so. I should like to be present when the devil finally gets his. Especially after all the shit I've weathered at his hand.

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chiptte [2008-03-30 09:56:34 +0000 UTC]

*Gasps*... I felt a glaimpse of cheer and hope as I started reading, but all was dashed as I got to the end of the poem. You really know how to move the force of nature with you creative writting and poetry.

Bravo!

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peterdawes In reply to chiptte [2008-04-02 00:41:58 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* Thank you kindly, dear. I am quite the moody one, replete with emotional roller coasters. And you are kind enough to come along for the ride.

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LeonieSainteVire [2008-03-30 04:01:44 +0000 UTC]

upon the canvas of white
the shadows lean in for a kiss
their mouths become connected
while their souls unite as one
lips caressing lips
conveying unspoken messages
of love and passion
desire and longing
as though they possess no voice
with which to say it aloud

::soft sigh:::I love this passage. Another wonderful offering!

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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-02 00:15:30 +0000 UTC]

I have need of penning a few more sensual poems in such a tenor. As the spirit moves, of course. But that was one of my favorite portions of that poem as well.

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reanna-banana [2008-03-30 02:46:37 +0000 UTC]

ahh, it was happy... until the end. it was still impressive, though. i liked it.
since i forgot to give you a suggestion that made sense when i commented on your journal entry "help requested", i'll give it to you now: maybe try something more cheerful. describe what you like about the night.
i'm absolutely fascinated by night. if i could be nocturnal, i would be. night is my favourite time. is it yours?
write something about how beautiful the night is. is philly near the ocean? (i honestly don't know ) describe the view of the city lights on the water. try it. it's fun.

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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-04-02 00:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Philadelphia isn't far from the ocean, but at least an hour or so away. Poised against the bank of the Delaware River with the Schulykill River dividing east from west. Night time here is quite the menagerie of humanity and varied experiences. I shall have to capture it a bit more one of these evenings.
For now. . . happier thoughts. I have one poem I am holding onto which is a bit more cheerful. I shall submit it soon.

Thank you for sharing your feedback. You are a tremendous help to me, my dear.

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reanna-banana In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-02 00:52:30 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* ohh, stop it.
Philly sounds nice, i'll have to go there someday.

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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-04-02 03:15:09 +0000 UTC]

It is certainly a pleasant place to visit. Especially if you like the arts or history. Equal measures of both.

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