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blissful peels of mirthyour lips parted with delight
as you laugh at me
i raise an eyebrow and smile
exchanging ego for joy
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Comments: 21
katarthis [2008-09-10 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]
Simply superb. A little poke at one's self is always enjoyable when the mood was good.
k
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HoldingBackTears [2008-04-09 18:05:12 +0000 UTC]
quite the work peter. very well done. i applaud you.
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denlm [2008-04-06 23:06:37 +0000 UTC]
"...exchanging ego for joy." What a wonderful phrase. You make me jealous.
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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-07 15:56:12 +0000 UTC]
It was a moment worthy of envy. I envy it much myself.
I am glad you enjoyed that line. I was uncertain of it at first. But it seemed the best summary, even if it was not as aesthetically-crafted as I wished it to be.
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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-07 16:02:31 +0000 UTC]
It was perfect. And you know it!
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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 00:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Do immortals blush? THAT I would like to see.
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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 10:39:33 +0000 UTC]
*grins* In some sense of the word. We can certainly reflect that manner of facial expression.
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dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-06 03:25:04 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWWWWW !!!!! !!!!!
i always love reading your work
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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-09 00:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, dear Jazz
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peterdawes In reply to LunaticStar [2008-04-09 11:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It was an attempt at something lighter. I am constantly wandering in the desert of melancholy introspection. Cute is called for from time to time.
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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-09 11:27:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, dear Leonie.
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