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peterdawes — The Aloof Dance Partner by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-04-05 22:42:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 340; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description blissful peels of mirth
your lips parted with delight
as you laugh at me
i raise an eyebrow and smile
exchanging ego for joy
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Comments: 21

katarthis [2008-09-10 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Simply superb. A little poke at one's self is always enjoyable when the mood was good.

k

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HoldingBackTears [2008-04-09 18:05:12 +0000 UTC]

quite the work peter. very well done. i applaud you.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-04-11 18:35:12 +0000 UTC]

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PondDreamer [2008-04-08 08:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Utterly delightful...a moment well captured.

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peterdawes In reply to PondDreamer [2008-04-08 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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PondDreamer In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 00:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome.

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denlm [2008-04-06 23:06:37 +0000 UTC]

"...exchanging ego for joy." What a wonderful phrase. You make me jealous.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-07 15:56:12 +0000 UTC]

It was a moment worthy of envy. I envy it much myself.
I am glad you enjoyed that line. I was uncertain of it at first. But it seemed the best summary, even if it was not as aesthetically-crafted as I wished it to be.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-07 16:02:31 +0000 UTC]

It was perfect. And you know it!

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 00:29:47 +0000 UTC]

As I fight the urge to blush.

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denlm In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 00:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Do immortals blush? THAT I would like to see.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 10:39:33 +0000 UTC]

*grins* In some sense of the word. We can certainly reflect that manner of facial expression.

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dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-06 03:25:04 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWW !!!!! !!!!!
i always love reading your work

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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-09 00:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear Jazz

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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 01:08:42 +0000 UTC]

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LunaticStar [2008-04-06 01:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Last line is cute, it's a cute little poem.

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peterdawes In reply to LunaticStar [2008-04-09 11:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It was an attempt at something lighter. I am constantly wandering in the desert of melancholy introspection. Cute is called for from time to time.

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LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-05 23:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Hardly aloof! Well done, my friend!

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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-09 11:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear Leonie.

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YouInventedMe [2008-04-05 22:43:57 +0000 UTC]

lovely

xo!

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peterdawes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-04-05 22:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks, sir.

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