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Published: 2008-10-20 02:38:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 746; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 33
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Description the larger version of my icon picture. say cheese?
yes, i keep changing my image, but i am a roving bastard at times.

death becomes me, the assassin,
yet love infects the poet's being.
passion stains the blade;
it inspires the immortal soul.
it lights the fires of sentiment
and causes this heart of stone
to bleed with adoration.

just for one touch
of my beloved goddess.
i would barter my existence.

risen into new found life
driven into unknown pleasures,
inside the bonds of emotion, i cry out.
i wash the blood from my hands
and find redemption lost in the
gentle wind; the summer rain
that is the one i cherish.

lest the world be fooled, though,
i do not walk with the footsteps
of the righteous or the blameless.
i come not as a saint, but as a sinner.
i offer pearls of poetry
but still the invitation remains
just as sinister as it was before.

i sense your pulse and, drawn to it,
i whisper in your ear.
tell me all your deepest secrets,
let me weigh them in the balance.
let me see the confines of your spirit
and gauge the merit of your soul.
lest you think your sins can be hidden,
i can taste them all.

reveal your thoughts to me, dear friend.

show me your darkness,
and i will show you mine.

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Comments: 75

MoriaLord [2008-11-19 13:51:01 +0000 UTC]

wooooooooooow...I wonder...what were you thinking on this picture?...hmmm...

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peterdawes In reply to MoriaLord [2008-11-21 23:27:48 +0000 UTC]

i am up to no good, of course.

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MoriaLord In reply to peterdawes [2008-11-22 11:23:34 +0000 UTC]

why was I even doubt...lol

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QueenDevious [2008-10-30 22:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Is this REALLY you? I demand proof!

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peterdawes In reply to QueenDevious [2008-10-30 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

this is not proof enough?

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QueenDevious In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-30 23:09:23 +0000 UTC]

NO!

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peterdawes In reply to QueenDevious [2008-10-30 23:47:31 +0000 UTC]

*devilish grin* at the risk of upsetting you, my liege, the answer is complicated.
this is what i look like, yes.
the real me is riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma.
consider this picture my kiss for others to build a dream on.

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QueenDevious In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-31 00:43:17 +0000 UTC]

I see... I think. I would like you to offer your Queen a better answer. You may note me if you wish. *nod*

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peterdawes In reply to QueenDevious [2008-10-31 01:17:01 +0000 UTC]

note sent.

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EdwardCullenrocks [2008-10-30 21:08:56 +0000 UTC]

how old are you dude? if you don't mind me asking...

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peterdawes In reply to EdwardCullenrocks [2008-10-30 21:11:42 +0000 UTC]

how old do i look?

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EdwardCullenrocks In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-30 21:32:57 +0000 UTC]

20 something, 25, or 28 at the most....

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peterdawes In reply to EdwardCullenrocks [2008-10-30 21:41:42 +0000 UTC]

twenty-eight is correct. although, i have been told i look young for my age.
which, when one factors in being immortal, makes me look very young for my age.

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EdwardCullenrocks In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-30 21:47:04 +0000 UTC]

u do look really young, oh, and ranodmly, when are you going to put up the next canticle in prelude?

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peterdawes In reply to EdwardCullenrocks [2008-10-30 21:50:38 +0000 UTC]

very shortly. am working on it as we speak. had a few setbacks and other things that were time sensitive to see to.
by november 1st, because i am participating in nanowrimo and i wish to have another piece submitted before novel writing drags me under.

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EdwardCullenrocks In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-31 15:19:16 +0000 UTC]

awesome, I can't wait to read it^-^

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CrimsonThrenody [2008-10-27 06:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Definitely a sexy depiction!

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peterdawes In reply to CrimsonThrenody [2008-10-27 14:18:46 +0000 UTC]

why thank you, dear.

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CrimsonThrenody In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-27 17:55:06 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome

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LNIN9 [2008-10-25 23:24:30 +0000 UTC]

you sly devil you....

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peterdawes In reply to LNIN9 [2008-10-27 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]

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Useless-girl [2008-10-25 19:38:19 +0000 UTC]

REally good picture and the poem suits it as well, I love the total effect.

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HoldingBackTears [2008-10-22 19:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Celeste on the brain, Peter?

XD


I know this is going to sound wierd..... really wierd... coming from a chick and all...... but i REALLY want that tie. O_O

don't hate me! D: i can't help my wierdness. ;~;

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-10-23 01:28:28 +0000 UTC]

when is celeste not on my brain, dear?

not weird at all. when is your birthday?

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-23 01:37:56 +0000 UTC]

It would be the 14th of January.
May I be so bold to ask what brought about this question, dear Peter? You have me dripping with curiousity. *tilts head and smiles*

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Kathryn-777 [2008-10-22 02:43:31 +0000 UTC]

You look like you're pondering what other wicked thought your going to dish out Peter....LOL. This is very representative....

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peterdawes In reply to Kathryn-777 [2008-10-23 01:37:09 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* embroiled in nefarious scheming.

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Kathryn-777 In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-25 03:11:39 +0000 UTC]

LOL....the best kind!

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Losttothepast [2008-10-21 23:50:30 +0000 UTC]

You look like my English Teacher.... O.O

Gorgeous picture though, Peter. I miss reading your work. No time lately, but after NaNo, I'll have plenty ^^

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peterdawes In reply to Losttothepast [2008-10-21 23:53:07 +0000 UTC]

your english teacher has fangs and an aversion to sunlight?
have missed your presence, rachael. i hope all is well.

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Losttothepast In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-22 00:35:30 +0000 UTC]

It's very possible that he does have the traits of a vampire. I'll have to ask him.

All is well as life lets it. Best wishes for you too, Peter. ^^

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purecountry [2008-10-21 02:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Very nice..I always kinda knew you were good looking.. Nice to put a face with someone you admire through their writing.. Very nicely done...

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Kira73 [2008-10-20 23:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Uh ... yum?

I love the little splash of red in the backround.

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TolleranzaBella [2008-10-20 20:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, very nice. Of course, I knew you were beautiful - all vampires seem to be.

I agree with another comment made - it's nice to know the face behind the devilishly delicious words.

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ItsxMagik [2008-10-20 19:15:35 +0000 UTC]

FIERCE.
I'm sorry; I couldn't resist.

Awesome shades by the way.

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Sereda [2008-10-20 16:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Very sexy! I do like a well-dressed man

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frisca-freak [2008-10-20 13:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Yay its you!

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peterdawes In reply to frisca-freak [2008-10-20 15:39:29 +0000 UTC]

where??

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chiptte [2008-10-20 07:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Hello, Peter. I see you!

Ahh, the assassin finally moves out of the shadows and I must say, you look really fine in red. I knew you would show yourself sooner or later!

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peterdawes In reply to chiptte [2008-10-20 15:15:05 +0000 UTC]

i suffered from a bit of performance anxiety. assassins are not exactly known for flaunting their appearance in such a public manner.

how have you been, hope?

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chiptte In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-21 10:31:56 +0000 UTC]

*Sighs* I really wish I could say things are bright and rosie right now. But I'm up to my neck in shool work, It's killing my free time to complete any art work that I promised to finish months ago.

I just can't wait for Christmas to roll around and get the school work load off. Other then that, nothing new really. I can't really do much since I come from a low income family and we have to save alot of money if we wanted to traval. You know money don't grow on trees.

On the other hand, will you be updating anymore chapters of your recent work? Can't wait to read more!

Take care.

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Guitar-Child [2008-10-20 04:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Heh, it's good to finally know the face of the friend that I've been spaeking to for so long

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peterdawes In reply to Guitar-Child [2008-10-20 04:13:10 +0000 UTC]

a bit more unshaven than usual. people tell me this look constitutes as being attractive, though.

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Guitar-Child In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-20 04:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Well I would have to say that yes, most people do like it... I would only know because most of my girl friends go crazy for it. I, however, have always had a preference for punkrockers and emos, but that's just the teen hormones talking

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peterdawes In reply to Guitar-Child [2008-10-20 04:23:24 +0000 UTC]

what constitutes as being a punk rocker these days?
i hail back from the old school days of punk. the clash and siouxsie and the banshees, for instance. the ramones. etc. any of them ring a bell?

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Guitar-Child In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-20 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Heh, well punk is never going to be as great as it was in the 80s, but these days punk is considered being someone who listens to things such as Bullet For My Vallentine, Three Days Grace, Chevelle, Pink Slipknot, Smashing Pumkins... things like that. And every once in a while you'll meet someone who still lives for the real stuff like Aerosmith, and Guns N' Roses...

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peterdawes In reply to Guitar-Child [2008-10-20 23:06:04 +0000 UTC]

i have heard of chevelle and smashing pumpkins. not all that familiar with the rest. are they any good?

aerosmith and guns and roses are getting closer to my speed.

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Guitar-Child In reply to peterdawes [2008-10-21 00:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I just happen to think that they're some of the best. A few others that I practically live on they're so good would be Escape The Fate, Evanescence, Flyleaf, My Chemical Romance, The Used (especially them) and Within Temptation. I would strongly advise listening to them if you like things like hard rock and metal... or peraps even alternative and gothic rock.

Well then maybe you've heard of Social Distortion and Stone Temple Pilots?

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Obsidian-Siren [2008-10-20 04:02:44 +0000 UTC]

*clears my throat* My beloved assassin, feeling your "oats" are you? Hmmm, seems like someone's been having a bit too much fun while I was gone. *devious grin*

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peterdawes In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2008-10-20 04:07:39 +0000 UTC]

i am surrounded, beloved. and being brushed up against enough times that you could cut the tension in here with a knife.
i may need your help with that. *waggles eyebrows*

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