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within the confinesof deepest dreams
where shadows dance
as they once had
dispelling beams of light
within
the eclipse of
subtle candlelight.
i see you there,
your eyes reflecting
the flame that sits
upon a wick
one i thought
might have
surrendered life
when darkness
suffocated it
abandoned
the caretaker
left his station
yet there it is,
a conflagration
where once there was
an ember
there is life
where once i thought
there might be
death
oh blessed hope
that takes up
residence
within the room
once shrouded
by empty dreams
and stilled promises
the quiet crypt of
days since passed
i see it there
lost in the gaze
of one i loved
then lost
then loved
a shadow that had
haunted me
with recollections
of my past
i see it there
lost in the smile
of one i kept
released
and hold
a lover who had
slipped away
like sand
inside an
hourglass
i see it there
in you
a second chance
with hope that
springs eternal
once again
within a room
where darkness bound
our hearts
and souls
where shifting twilight
with its
sullen lullaby
lulled us to sleep
where the largest,
smallest
gift of love
that simple,
complicated
concept
closed its eyes
in deep repose
and drove the dreamers
far apart
but nothing could
hold back the dawn
the peace that
follows night
darkness
surrenders its
dominion
against the
sovereign hand of morn
and dreamers dream
in jubilation
now that the shadows
on the wall
which once symbolized
a spectre
have taken form
for all to see.
the dancers,
more than silhouettes
the dreamers awaken
from their sleep
they now become
a man and woman
locked in each other's
grip again
within the confines
of deepest dreams
where once i sat
there by myself
now i can see
you stand before me
and now i know
just what i see
i know the one
who left
the candlelight
turn to smoke
was foolish.
and now i know
that second chances
were never meant
for fools like me
but they come
anyway
but you came
anyway
more than a spectre
the gentle soul
who once
completed me
the light of passion
in your eyes
the warmth of summer
in your smile
and now i say,
the night be damned
i found my sunlight
once again
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Comments: 18
katarthis [2008-09-10 03:10:48 +0000 UTC]
"I found my sunlight Once again." Pure magic. It's almost scary how you can write this way...
k
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DreamingMantis [2008-04-14 03:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Hope you don't really live or feel always like these words you told sadly but couragesly though you are truly forming a beautiful art with them.
"...
a lover who had
slipped away
like sand
inside an
hourglass"
That's the part I paused for a few seconds after I read and said : "Yeah, that's the point"
Other parts are also great but this is the sentence I'll never forget. Effective work just in one word.
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peterdawes In reply to DreamingMantis [2008-04-15 02:58:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly.
Often, I do experience these feelings. Though not always while I am penning the poem. Sometimes, the poems are recollections of experiences.
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DreamingMantis In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-15 04:57:36 +0000 UTC]
You are right about this recollection thing however it is "sometimes". I ,too, learned that in old days and used in some of my own poems later. Now, I am writing much more fictionally but I still remember them and use with emphaty. Hope your "often" can descend to "sometimes".
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HoldingBackTears [2008-04-09 18:36:04 +0000 UTC]
I sat in place for 2 minutes before I was able to function again... your works are that impecable. Beautiful as always.
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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-04-11 18:31:38 +0000 UTC]
I am sincerely pleased that you enjoy them.
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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-11 19:12:03 +0000 UTC]
I always enjoy your works. ^^
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LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-09 15:40:32 +0000 UTC]
I often wonder if Peter looks into my soul...
Or perhaps it is Leonie's immortal eyes that see within his.
Alors...incroyable...encore.
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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-04-10 03:07:20 +0000 UTC]
This immortal assuredly appreciates sympathetic eyes and a kindred spirit. It is often hard to both conceal and convey the type of being I am behind these works. To speak the heart and yet, make it accessible. You flatter me, dear Leonie.
Thank you for the favorite.
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denlm [2008-04-09 05:33:46 +0000 UTC]
Did I notice doubt in those later lines? Hope not. You'll be waking from that dream soon, and the reality will be waiting with a smile and a kiss. Lovely, Peter. Lovely.
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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-04-09 10:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Not doubt; confession. The admission that this favor is certainly unmerited.
I quite enjoy the thought of that reality. Thank you, Denise.
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dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-09 02:51:36 +0000 UTC]
AHA first comment WOW!!!!!!! thats long and enjoyable.
i adore it so much ^^ very sweet agian <3
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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-09 10:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, kindly.
Yes, turned out a bit longer than I anticipated. Got swept up in the moment, I suppose you could say.
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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-09 13:16:39 +0000 UTC]
rofl wen dont you get into the momment?
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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-09 21:00:30 +0000 UTC]
A very good question. Allow me to get back to you on that.
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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-10 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]
lmao..... im still waiting jks you dont have to answer it cause we all know the answer
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peterdawes In reply to dark-dragon-wings [2008-04-12 20:53:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh good, so then you can tell me.
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dark-dragon-wings In reply to peterdawes [2008-04-13 02:38:04 +0000 UTC]
yeh if i remeber what we were talking about @.@ *looks back a bit*
ahh yes well i think about 1/7 of the time you dont get wrapped up into the 'lovie' momment
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